Open Poetry #8 |
My Hamlet (a story in verse) -- Favorite poem challenge! |
Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
I The pen would tremble in my hand The fervent ink would flow in prime, To start the story with no end-- An ageless tale told in rhyme. The ever-young and graceful Hamlet, Preserved in ink, upon a tablet, Shall neither fade nor ever rust. A poet’s breath shall sweep the dust And make anew all the forgotten, Which shall return like any season. Restoring life in words of reason, It will complete what was begotten And preaching loudly from the page, It will awake the sleeping age. II Thus we begin, let’s take a glimpse, Somewhere in Denmark, long ago-- Young Hamlet lived inside his dreams, And trusted visions that he saw. The throne was his and so was glory And this he knew. Without a worry, He eagerly looked to that day When he’d be king. The prince felt gay Just knowing that he had control. He placed himself above his friends, The world was lying in his hands-- In every game they played. His soul Was branded thus by destined fate. The role was his and Hamlet played! III He mimicked time upon his face, He craved adventure, hungered trouble-- Just like the rest, despised disgrace And fell in love for it was common. He loved to hunt, enjoyed the thrill, Always the first to get the kill, With passion, lacking guilt and shame, He finished off the wounded game And feasted on the bleeding beast. Was always proud of his feat, All dinner bragged about his deed, About his strength, and was not pleased-- Never received full satisfaction-- Until he’d get a kind reaction. IV His love was rare and so unique That many viewed it as deceiving. Effected to affection’s peak, He freely spoke about his feeling. Ophelia, he loved you dearly! At night he dreamt of you. Sincerely, He wrote to you about his love, -- You never trusted him enough And questioning his faultless will, Mislead your heart. Your heart-- Not fooled, knew from the start That he was pure. He loved you still! Demanding strongly, Hamlet yearned To have you love him in return. V Then, sorrow struck him with a blow-- So suddenly, old Hamlet died Our Prince, -- he buried sadness slow And by the tomb he moaned and cried. Sad hours dragged. Clock’s heavy hands Would close the casket, tie loose ends And bury pain. Yet grief remained, And moved by feelings that he gained, Our hero lost all sleep. No longer Were his dreams as bright and clear. Yet, since that moment, not a tear He shed, but grew much stronger. His weary face showed no remorse, The world was falling on its course. VI The sun was shinning and the weather Was pleasant and the grass was growing. And all was living—all that mattered! And all was blossoming, not knowing That such a tragedy took place. The children’s eyes sincerely gazed As flowers bloomed and all seemed just! The world was moving as it must. And Hamlet picked up by this spirit Thought not about his father’s death All was alive and nature’s breath Blew on his face and he would hear it. And bringing Hamlet back to life The nature with excitement thrived. VII Abruptly, calmness turned to rage-- And Hamlet walked around sunken, The Queen, his mother, was engaged To marry Claudius, his uncle. Too sudden! -- Not a month yet passed Since king deceased, and she would cast Her sight upon another man. A curse Indeed, for such a deed is worse Than mortal sin and for our Prince The past would slowly come to vanish. He felt abandoned, sunk in anguish, And cursed his fate. And ever since His father’s death, could not be reached-- He lost his touch and lacked his speech. VIII While held imprisoned in his castle, Watched closely by the hungry eyes-- He searched for truth, and in that hassle, He found naught but mere disguise. Pure vengeance grew in Hamlet’s heart He, with this notion could not part, But stood against it. All was blurry! Some say-- he left his nest too early, And others-- that he had no nest. To helplessly see dreams grow molded, Or be delighted blindfolded? -- Who is to judge what is the best? Thus Hamlet watched all he adored Become offensive and abhorred. IX One night, his lengthy contemplation Was shortened greatly by his servants. The words they spoke aroused sensations And gave his will a whole new purpose. He followed them and he was stunned! -- Appeared a phantom and a bond Was formed. The sun would rise, And melt the vision in his eyes And all was still before his sight. And all was quiet, all was calm. Just like the sky before the storm, All seemed so trite, but in that night, Eternally, three fates have crossed-- The son, the father and the ghost. X Their will was simple: to avenge-- Bring Justice forth to do her part! Our Hamlet, yearned to get revenge, And yet remain true in his heart. But, was he sure of his assumption? He re-examined his presumption And found no alibi, no cause. Did he believe his father’s ghost? Was it the Devil? Who could know? These questions, yet to be contested, Remained a burden and unanswered Would stress our hero more and more. A plot was plotted for pure eyes To catch the killer by surprise. XI He asked himself in deep depression, “To be or not?” and in his voice, He sought the answer. In confession He realized -- he had no choice. “To be... but how?” he’d often ponder But found no answer in his wonder Other than “be.” In meditation, He’d seek a godly revelation, But nothing came. Enslaved in grief, He dreamt that all was quite well And yet he couldn’t break the spell Which filled his thoughts. And brief Were nights, long were the days, Which he would spend in search of space. XII As long as conscience plays her role, You are alive, my cherished reader, -- If nothing can disturb your soul, Then you’ve deceased and neither Love nor breath can bring you back. You’re always judged by what you lack, Not what you have. Don’t waste A single breath in rapid haste, But drink love’s potion-- magic brew, And breathe to love and strive to live, To sense the pain, to feel the grief-- This above all: to self be true! Enough of morals! I’m excited-- A play is staged and we’re invited! XIII Hamlet, the ultimate observer-- Sees all as all observe the play. The actor speaks with ardent fervor The lines that he was told to say-- He states, “...hands apt, drugs fit And time agreeing...” He does the deed. Pours poison in King’s ears and then Out of the second row, the man Arises. “Let strucken deer go weep,” States Hamlet and the lights go on. The play is left half-way undone For some-- “...and some must sleep.” An echo duplicates-- “hands apt...”-- The mouse falls into the trap. XIV Prince Hamlet manifests in poems-- So cruel and very strongly versed-- Thus ends one play -- another opens, Or better yet evolves from first. Eyes focus, players lose their shield, The player’s faces-- now revealed! True drama starts! Becoming conscious, The rivals meet and silence plunges! And walking slowly on the stage Our hero stares into the night-- His future stands before his sight And preaches like a clever sage. And only minutes separate Two lives from finding their fate. XV As one sought heaven for forgiveness While kneeling down in a prayer, The other raised his sword in bleakness But could not slay the praying slayer. For he who meets his death confessing Shall go to heaven with a blessing And find God. Thus Hamlet left Bearing revenge-- a massive heft, Upon his shoulders. He was certain-- His heart was beating like a drum-- The destined day would surely come To free our hero from this burden. And thus he walked away appeased And left his enemy in peace. XVI Seeking no vengeance from the holy, So wise in thought, he walked away, For every king must have his glory And every dog will have its day. In rage, he entered Gertrude’s room His anger had no time to cool. He harshly spoke and heard a cry-- A moan, a wail. And a spy Behind a tapestry met death. Was Hamlet acting out of fury? From madness? -- was he truly Mad? Or did he simply have No reason? --What’s done is done! The Queen felt pity for her son. XVII Oh, Gertrude! Overfilled with sadness, You were the victim of this plot! You prayed for peace and in this madness Your eyes refused to look at blood. And deeply struck by this commotion, You buried deeply your emotion And slept in slumber to that day, When Hamlet entered in a fray And gave you sight. He stabbed Your innocence, spoke daggers, And he exposed, and didn’t stagger, The anger in his bosom trapped. And looking at your soul, inside You could not find a place to hide. XVIII Something was rotting in the state. And slowly crumbling, it wailed. No longer could our hero wait And thus to England Hamlet sailed. With conscience, Hamlet could not sleep, One single notion he would keep That all was going for the worst And death was lying on his course. He chose to test his intuition And proved it true. All came to focus! King Claudius gave out the orders, And signed a paper-- his commission, Where he commanded to his men To slay the Prince upon the land. XIX King’s vicious plan was now exposed And Hamlet, overflowed with hatred, Would roar in rage, and from exhaust, He cursed the ship, the wind and nature. In passionate distress, he shivered And all seemed sinister and evil. And all alone in his beliefs-- He felt forsaken, lost, deceived. Just as the moment turned intense, Our hero fled from the disaster. His fortune fell on two imposters Whom in the past, he called his friends. And all alone he traveled back,-- Which takes us to the final act. XX Into a churchyard Hamlet wandered And by one monument he stopped. And Hamlet’s eyes perceived in wonder Then, from the weariness they dropped. There, in the grave, his past would fester, “Here lies a joker and a jester...” -- Poor Yorick! You were once his teacher, But now deceased, -- left not a feature. Yet Hamlet still recalled with pleasance- The smile that he loved so much He saw the hands he used to touch His memory preserved your essence And Hamlet carried in his mind The weight of what was left behind. XXI Inside his head, decades and ages Decayed and faded in the night. He saw the King, the Queen and Laetres,-- Stood short of breath, before his sight His love was buried. Pain struck deep! His soul appalled began to weep. He went to offer his condolence But Laetres, blind to his solace, Attacked him and refused to see His innocence. Prince Hamlet then, Would try to reason with this man,-- Laetres ignored him. Even he, Stood by the crown, hypnotized— No longer seeing through his eyes. XXII Words often leave a deadly touch. The noble Laetres felt it. Hence, He challenged Hamlet to a match And Hamlet, taught in youth to fence, Agreed. And both were ready to defend Their honor. With a rapid hand The Prince struck first and soon Again. Then Laetres. From the wound Blood dripped. In haste, they traded Swords. And then, under a magic spell, Both froze at once, both fighters fell And instantly two stars have faded. And lying on the floor, in blood, Laetres unmasked the wicked plot. XXIII Both saw the crown’s charming shine, And watched the sun play on its tips. Meanwhile, Gertrude drank the wine, Which was prepared for Hamlet’s lips.— Another death from poisoned drink! Prince Hamlet rose and killed the king And fell again, his sword would drop. And thus in Denmark, chaos stopped. And only Gods watched in dismay, That day, as tons of blood was shed, A country-- ruined, people-- dead, They saw it all. Thus ends the play. I pray this story strikes you deep Some must live on, “...and some must sleep.” XXIV To sacrifice yourself for virtue, For mere belief, which seems deceiving! To be! To stand against your fortune! How sad is life? -- how worthy living! Dear Hamlet this we owe to you! -- You challenged life and this you knew, You walked to certain death. I pray, That I could take your path some day And die for honor! Die with pride! To see what dreams will come, if any, And if one comes, to pray for many. And seeing stars fall in the night, To make a wish that they would rise And shine again inside our eyes! XXV Time is a gathering of moments, Sometimes we act, sometimes rehearse. Thus ends one play-- another opens, Or better yet, evolves from first, Which never ends. In admiration, We closely watch each situation Develop into something bigger, -- So big, that many cannot figure The moral it conveys so clearly. So what’s the moral? -- How can I Describe to you what’s in your eye? And this I say to you sincerely: Perhaps it’s better not to see, And simply let the question be. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
XXVI: WOW! Very well done Master ... my goodness that took me a long time to read, I can't imagine how long it took to write. VERY well done, and beautifully written! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
William Shakespeare couldn't have done it better himself. Extremely well written m'friend All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
You are indeed talented, Master. Corinne |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
Kit, you've actually read the whole thing?! I wasn't expecting that, thank you! To tell you the truth, it only took me about a week to write... I guess that the muses were working with me! Jeffrey, I could never compete with Will... Thank you for your compliment! Corinne, thank you for responding! |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Just wanted to bump this up so more people could see it... Elizabeth I'm grabbing my hat and coat I'm leaving the cat a note Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town! |
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