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Jamie
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0 posted 2000-07-07 12:03 PM


Change - haiku

Poor flowers freezing-
Winter's long shadows have returned
Nature changing robes.



Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".


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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2000-07-07 12:11 PM


{~,^}
kaile
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singapore
2 posted 2000-07-07 12:11 PM


glad to be the first to vote for this!!!

this is just beautiful..really dig at the personification in the third line

ENCORE!ENCORE!

Mark Bohannan
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3 posted 2000-07-07 12:15 PM


This is a wonderful haiku.  One day I may attempt one of these, but they are beyond me at this point.  If you get a chance I would like your honest input on one of poems entitled "Just A Kiss".  Not begging for a read just looking for a different perspective on things.
Butterflies_dont_cry
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Michigan
4 posted 2000-07-07 12:16 PM


  The sorrow and splendor
of change...wonderfully penned Jamie~

Tanga
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5 posted 2000-07-08 04:12 AM


You have captured the continuous change of life's beauty.  Well done ! Hugss <**>
Dark Angel
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6 posted 2000-07-08 05:34 AM


Jamie you are so good at these!! Loved it
More Please!!  

Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive,
my body goes on, my spirit has died
and I though alive, feel dead inside.

"Rose Petal"

Janet Marie
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7 posted 2000-07-08 07:04 AM


so much said ... in so few perfect words
later-Haiku-gator  
take care
jm

What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly
~LaoTzeTao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~


Paula Finn
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missouri
8 posted 2000-07-08 08:30 AM


Jamie...wonderful as always
kat
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9 posted 2000-07-08 08:44 AM


Jamie, you truly are amazing at these.  I've never written a haiku but after reading quite a few of yours I just might take my chance with one. Hmmmmmmmm..we'll see. lol

You've painted a picture with this one. I love everything about it but I especially love the last line. Keep'em comin!  


kat

Jamie
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10 posted 2000-07-08 01:07 PM


Once aqain, my sincere thanks to you all.
And again I apologize for the overdose of Haiku. I will try to cut back....lol

Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".


Kit McCallum
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11 posted 2000-07-08 01:11 PM


This was just wonderful Jamie!  So much said in so few words, well done!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Siren's Song
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12 posted 2000-07-08 01:24 PM


Once again poetman... awesome!
JulieAnn
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13 posted 2000-07-08 01:44 PM


You amaze me more and more!!!! This is excellent....so much told short, sweet and to the point!!! Great work!!!  

Julie :)



Jamie
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14 posted 2000-07-08 08:54 PM


Kit- Bay- and JulieAnn;

Thanks for the kindness.
Each word is a blessing to my soul.
I know our time is limited and I thank you for spending some of yours with me.

Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".


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