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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven 
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Change - haiku Poor flowers freezing- Winter's long shadows have returned Nature changing robes. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
glad to be the first to vote for this!!!  this is just beautiful..really dig at the personification in the third line ENCORE!ENCORE!  |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
This is a wonderful haiku. One day I may attempt one of these, but they are beyond me at this point. If you get a chance I would like your honest input on one of poems entitled "Just A Kiss". Not begging for a read just looking for a different perspective on things. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
.gif) The sorrow and splendor of change...wonderfully penned Jamie~ |
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Tanga Junior Member
since 2000-07-02
Posts 39BC Canada |
You have captured the continuous change of life's beauty. Well done ! Hugss <**> |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Jamie you are so good at these!! Loved it More Please!! Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive, my body goes on, my spirit has died and I though alive, feel dead inside. "Rose Petal" |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
so much said ... in so few perfect words later-Haiku-gator take care jm What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly ~LaoTzeTao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Jamie...wonderful as always |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Jamie, you truly are amazing at these. I've never written a haiku but after reading quite a few of yours I just might take my chance with one. Hmmmmmmmm..we'll see. lol You've painted a picture with this one. I love everything about it but I especially love the last line. Keep'em comin! kat |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Once aqain, my sincere thanks to you all. And again I apologize for the overdose of Haiku. I will try to cut back....lol Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This was just wonderful Jamie! So much said in so few words, well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Siren's Song Junior Member
since 2000-07-02
Posts 17 |
Once again poetman... awesome! |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
You amaze me more and more!!!! This is excellent....so much told short, sweet and to the point!!! Great work!!! Julie :) |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Kit- Bay- and JulieAnn; Thanks for the kindness. Each word is a blessing to my soul. I know our time is limited and I thank you for spending some of yours with me. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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