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Open Poetry #8

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

0 posted 2000-07-06 08:42 PM

~RAIN INSPIRED TEARS SENRYU~

5-7-5

My tears are not pain
but merely reflections of
the rainfall outside

*By Melissa Honeybee*

The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

1 posted 2000-07-06 08:49 PM

Melissa I cannot say i really know what senryu is...but I know this is beautiful and that is all I need to know

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2000-07-06 09:00 PM

Melissa~

YES !
Beautiful and inspiring !

Such a sadness reigns
Within tears softly falling
Rain - inside and out

~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

3 posted 2000-07-07 08:15 AM

Thank you Paula and Marge, I enjoy writing senryus

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee

The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

4 posted 2000-07-07 10:58 AM

and i enjoy reading them!

Rain senyru

Drowsy plants awake
Renewed hidden zeal for life
Sky cries buckets, touched

Jamie
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since 2000-06-26

Posts 3168
Blue Heaven

5 posted 2000-07-07 11:17 AM

Ahhhhhhhhhh.

Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

6 posted 2000-07-07 07:17 PM

Thank you Kaile and Jamie

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee

The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly

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