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~Lost Love's Ghost~
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~Lost Love's Ghost~ |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
 ~Lost Love’s Ghost~ You walk into my thoughts with butterfly slippers upon your feet You carry in your wings the dreams we once held so sweet Dancing across my heart like you never retreated from it’s walls Your arms are there with a feathery landing for all of my falls You hold me closely as you stroke my feelings with care Opening the folds of memories that with only you I share We dance among the diamonds that have lain out their special light Within the beams of moon glow retracing the steps in the night Giving me peace in the turmoil of my raging inner storms Beyond the showers of pain a bridge to your rainbow forms Upon the mountains of tragedy you stop me from throwing life away Reminding me that view of sunrise will breathe love of life my way My lover and mate of my soul the one that holds my life in his palm The one that upon crest of crashing waves can make my soul calm I look past the pain when my angel turned to walk from me And retreat to moments of love that last my heart an eternity I cherish moments when he graces my life to become my loving host These are the tranquil moments I share with my Lost Love’s Ghost |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Hi BDC Beautifully expressed thoughts of a lost love..a love you once held dear..strange we have to accept fate and carry on with some memmories. Sincerely A_L |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Giving me peace in the turmoil of my raging inner storms Beyond the showers of pain a bridge to your rainbow forms Upon the mountains of tragedy you stop me from throwing life away Reminding me that view of sunrise will breathe love of life my way a wonderful, beautiful and haunting poem echoing the passions and joys of love. you stole my breath with this poem. ------------------------ "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting." E.E Cummings. manic street preachers "Culture Alienation Borebom and Despair" "I know I believe in nothing but it is my nothing" -faster MSP "And you see, I kind of shiver to conformity Did you see, the way I cower to authority, you see And my life, it's a series of compromises anyway It's a sham, and I'm conditioned to accept it all, you see" six by Paul Draper. ----- |
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lorilockheart Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 206Alabama |
BTC, I love the ending of this poem - the memory of that love, still living with it as if it were real. Excellent, as always. In kindred spirit, Lori ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance. song by LeeAnn Womack ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
tragedy so sweetly written..I hope you have healed form your loss.....nice poem...really enjoyed it.... |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
*sigh and a stray tear* Pure beauty, butterfly. Absolutely gorgeous work, as always.  *Krista Knutson* "Thought is real, physical is the illusion..." Albert from ~What Dreams May Come~ |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
A_L* Yes we do have to accept fate...we don't have to like it...just accept it thank you for reading.Brian* Many thanks for your kind reply and for reading, I appreciate it. Lori* Sometimes the memory is sweeter than the real thing was...that's the flaw with memories and perhaps why we hold them so dear. Thank you much for reading and for understanding.JulieAnn~ I'm as healed as I shall ever be I think and writing helps purge the feelings when they come, I'm glad you enjoyed, thank you.Krista* My thanks for your sweetness you are a gem!! [This message has been edited by Butterflies_dont_cry (edited 06-12-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
 *SIGH* ... you know... i know ...our hearts know (did ya know BSQ calls my Icon "butterfly slippers") *smile* you know that i love this one right?? yes, you know love ya ms SS quiet comfort  jm And it's good that I'm not angry, I just need to get over, I'm not angry, anymore Cry when you cry, run when you run, love when you love, represent the ashes that you leave behind ~MB20~ "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" ~Lao Tze Tao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
BTC, this is beautiful, with wonderful imagery. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
J.M.~*~Butterfly Slippers....yeppers I knew that tis where the inspiration came from I'm glad you noticed...and that's a beaut of a b-fly Loves ya for the butterfly kisses and for the QC SS, many thanks tonight.Eloise* Thank you so much for reading and for your kind reply. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
B.D.C., My dear sweet friend...hang on to those memories and take with you the lessons learned. I know that you have found inner peace to be able to write with such feeling. Great work!! LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This was stunning imagery Butterflies, absolutely wonderful. What a truly lovely and touching poem! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ButterfliesDC~ Awwwwwww ! I just LOVE it ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
This is just beautiful my friend! WOW! God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Butterflies DC~ This is beautiful! Then again so is all of your work I wanted to take a momentto say, you are one amazing writer. Each piece I read of yours is written with deep intense emotion. This has a quiet strength and comfort about it. Your writing even at it's most sad, has a quiet tranquility about it that calms me. I thank you my friend. Keep up the amazing poetry. Take care. ~Amy~ "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Haunting |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Beautiful imagery, "butterfly slippers"... one can only imagine... Sunshine ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
L.W.* I'm glad you see the peace It's there just a little cloudy at the moment, Thank you for reading my friend~Kit* Thank you for your compliments, I appreciate it very much~ Marge* Thank you sweet Lady I'm glad you liked it~ Eagle* As always thank you for your kindness, I'm glad you liked it my friend~ Amy* You put tears in my eyes...you are so sweet, thank you for your kindness, what an angel you are~ Hoot* Thank you for reading~ Sunshine* Thank you I owe that one to J.M. and BSQ~ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I will "FOREVER" love you!!! |
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