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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Forever If I could put you in a locket Keep you right next to my heart Forever you’d be with me We’d never be apart If you could be a flame I’d keep it burning all the time By my side I’d always keep you Forever you would shine If you could be a song I’d know your every lyric The one and only melody Forever I would sing it If you could be my blanket I would wrap you all around me Feel your warmth all over Forever wrapped so tightly If only you could be with me I’d stop the hands of time For eternity I’d show my love for you Forever you’d be mine [This message has been edited by kat (edited 07-06-2000).] |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
.gif) Kat* This is so tender and beautiful this has captured my heart tonight. I know this feeling so well.....You have captured the words when I thought there were none. Thank you so much for sharing this! |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Butterflies: Thank-you! I'm so glad it captured your heart. I'm glad you liked it!  kat |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Pickles Forever!  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
kat this is beautiful very well written and thought out well expressed with a gentle grace very nice read take care jm What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly ~LaoTzeTao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
such a warmth expressed in this wonderful piece...well done Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kat~ Oh, yeahhhhhhhh ! 'If you could be a song I’d know your every lyric The one and only melody Forever I would sing it' Sure like this one. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Insect! Pickles forever??? AAAAAAAAAAHHHHH!!!!  LOL It's Kat! KAT! LOL You're too much!! lol. Janet: Thank-you! I'm happy you enjoyed reading it. Tracie: Thanks so much! Marge: Thank-you! I'm glad you liked it so much! kat [This message has been edited by kat (edited 07-06-2000).] |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Kat,...so glad that I made this sweet little number my first read this morning. Thanks. *Peace. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
kat-this is such a wonderful read. It was truely nice to have this one rest my eyes on this morning |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
SpitFire: I'm so glad you did also. Glad you liked it. Thanks! Mark: Thanks so much! I'm thrilled that you did. kat [This message has been edited by kat (edited 07-06-2000).] |
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MysticalNights Member
since 2000-05-17
Posts 112Oklahoma |
This was also my first read of the morning. Although my eyes are barely open enough to see it, it did bring on the first smile of my day! Excellent work kat!! A Dream is a Wish the Heart Makes... |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
MysticalNights: I'm glad it was able to bring your first smile of the day. Thank-you for that compliment and I'm happy that you enjoyed it so much! kat |
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