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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! 
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We talked for hours on that roof top bar exposing all your hurt to me under the stars forgetting for a moment that I only need a friend dreading that the night is soon going to end so much in common right from the start you spoke to me straight from your heart though we met only hours before it began to seem like so much more i am cautious of moving too fast fearing to live up to the ghost of the past don't be offended by my fears it is just that i've cried too many tears getting to know you in a special way lovers or friends? we'll find out someday searching for answers in my soul wanting a friendship that can only grow seemingly endless the night drew cold in the end the sign on my heart said sold.... Julie :) |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
If you only knew how these words hit right now. This speaks volumes of a situation I find myself in and am approaching with caution. It is however as you said, already sold. Thanks for sharing with such wonderful timing. |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Thank you for your wonderful response...I am glad it hit home for you.....  Julie :) |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Haven't been 'there' in many years ... but the sold sign was a good move  very nicely done Rex |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JulieAnn~ So come on now .... fess up ... who's your 'broker'!  Great enjoyment reading this one. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
.gif) Julie* I loved this! The ending was so perfect...yep ya SOLD me on this one |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Thank you Rex.....I'll have to look up some of your poetry... Thanks Marge....and I haven't found the right broker as of yet by the way.... BDC.....thank you..... Julie :) |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
I'm "sold" on this one. Like the sincere feelings. ~nice writing~ A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Thank you for your reply Danny....but it was sod then returned guess I'll have to find words for that..... Julie :) |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
A great pick for the book JulieAnne. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
How well I know the feeling of caution...then saying the hell with it and throwing caution to the wind...sometimes you win...like i did. |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Lovely, Julia!!! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
Wheeee! Geez I love that feeling. When you just know that there's something between you, even though you've just met. Trepidation, anticipation and finally, realization! Opportunities passed are opportunities lost! Great poem, Julie. Got me thinkin'! Trew. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah Julie, the price we pay... well done! |
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angel girl Member
since 1999-07-23
Posts 322within a whisper... |
i really like this. good job. One touch of nature makes the whole world kin. -William Shakespeare |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful thoughts JulieAnn ... you've expressed this feeling so well! Wonderful! Best wishes, /Kit |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
thank you all so much for your kind words....I appreciate all your comments and glad you enjoyed it!!! Julie :) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Just what I always say Julie. . . sometimes, you have to just go with it. . . Excellent poem!!! --------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Thanks Sven...that means alot coming from you. You are an excellent writer with alot of talent..... Julie :) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Really nice thoughts Julie...I have met women that I liked immediately and they were sold right away and sometimes it takes awhile to appreciate them and sometimes it is a no sale...I have been a no sale too many times...James |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this was truly refreshing, a wonderful read!! Kathleen |
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