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Moon Magic |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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(Just haveing some fun here) Moon Magic In the garden late at night the moon lit bower silvered and pond a glow with fairy light and the crickets song is mellow The creeping cat has found my bench and one eyed watch is keeping for in the very back the fence in moon magic is picket changing Now a castle spire stakes the yard and the pond to mote has turned and the cat has left my side to guard the bush where leaves now flurry The shadow of the palm has bent 'til its leaves are finger tips that tapered long and graceful sent a shiver across the yard I was frozen in the lock of fear my senses felt the touching of the shadowed creeping silent leer that watched and knew my longing To stand up tall and slowly face my phantom boldly knowing that the moon bathed night and I were safe and to my bed was going [This message has been edited by Martie (edited 07-04-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
and now so are we..(having fun here)  love the creative imagery... and especially now that I dont have to imagine it...  "Now a castle spire stakes the yard and the pond to mote has turned" now how cool is that!!! way cool!!! later-moonbeam-gator jm |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ Ah, but amongst the moonbeams dances a magical muse of delight taking your imagination on the merriest ride of the night 'The creeping cat has found my bench and one eyed watch is keeping' Just wonderful fun indeed. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Like the kid who sees the tree turn into a monster or the doll in his room loom, wonderfully written, Martie! Corinne |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Oh Martie, It must be all that time you spent on the Trinity; how do your museles feel..? I'm still trying to recoupe, regroup. You know it took me 4 daz to get the lawn mowed. By the way, nice pic you sent. RJ says I get to send one of her your way. O boy..! And, I could use a little of that moon magic over here... Sending love and prayers. Forever (lucky) Dale |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Wonderful imagery. This took a very creative imagination and I feel blessed to have read it. Well done. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Martie, You are getting very creative dear! Makes me wonder whats coming next. Just kepp them coming Love Liz |
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