repost- Your Only Sunshine

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Open Poetry #8

repost- Your Only Sunshine

jennie may*
Member

since 2000-06-17

Posts 122

0 posted 2000-07-04 03:20 PM

the rain is thick

the afternoon
giggles at me

and you

behind me
still
chasing my skirt

until I give in

your hair
wet with
the gray sky

dark eyes
with oceans of
secrets
for me to drown in

I love them

I hope they
remember

I am your sunshine...

your only sunshine

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2000-07-04 08:36 PM

JennieMay~
This is just delightful.
How very special are the thoughts.
I'm so glad you re-posted.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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OLIAS
Senior Member

since 2000-06-20

Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa

2 posted 2000-07-04 08:54 PM

I love the line "the afternoon giggles at me", and I'm going to quote you, this is a wonderful poem I like it alot, Ive read it three times and it makes me happy and I'm going to vote

Thanks Olias

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