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jennie may*
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since 2000-06-17
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0 posted 2000-07-04 03:20 PM


the rain is thick

the afternoon
giggles at me

and you

behind me
still
chasing my skirt

until I give in

your hair
wet with
the gray sky

dark eyes
with oceans of
secrets
for me to drown in

I love them


I hope they
remember

I am your sunshine...


your only sunshine

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-07-04 08:36 PM


JennieMay~
This is just delightful.
How very special are the thoughts.
I'm so glad you re-posted.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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OLIAS
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since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa
2 posted 2000-07-04 08:54 PM


I love the line "the afternoon giggles at me", and I'm going to quote you, this is a wonderful poem I like it alot, Ive read it three times and it makes me happy and I'm going to vote

Thanks Olias

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