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A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2000-07-04 02:56 PM


The First time We talked,
I felt you,
Felt your words deep into my soul,

The first time  I heard your voice,
I was lost ,
Lost in your sweetness,

I know  your soul feels mine,
Calling you,
Calling out across the miles,

I was touched by your love,
Love of your heart,
Love I can't let go,

I can search the world over,
never will I find,
Your love again,

The first will never be my last,
Last is final,
A lifetime is too long to live without you!





[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 07-05-2000).]

© Copyright 2000 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
Daniel_vv
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since 2000-06-28
Posts 61

1 posted 2000-07-04 06:33 PM


This poem has great feelings entangled within.

Well done.

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA
2 posted 2000-07-04 08:06 PM



A bitersweet read, as I am going through this right now.  Well written and expressed!  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee


The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart
3 posted 2000-07-05 01:34 AM


Daniel.. thank you for your compliments!!

Melissa...E-mail me or chat on ICQ!!I know what your feeling!Thanks for your kind comments!

kat
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since 2000-05-20
Posts 387

4 posted 2000-07-05 02:22 AM


Romantic:  After reading your other poem and saw how much I related to it, I just had to read this one. Now that I have I'm amazed because I also am going through something similar. This is beautiful also.  

kat

Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
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In the winds of Cherokee song
5 posted 2000-07-05 02:47 AM


Seems as it is catching this torment we all are in.  Sometimes inches become a thousand miles.  Great read as I feel your pain in every word.
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