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A Lifetime Is Too Long Without You
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A Lifetime Is Too Long Without You |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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The First time We talked, I felt you, Felt your words deep into my soul, The first time I heard your voice, I was lost , Lost in your sweetness, I know your soul feels mine, Calling you, Calling out across the miles, I was touched by your love, Love of your heart, Love I can't let go, I can search the world over, never will I find, Your love again, The first will never be my last, Last is final, A lifetime is too long to live without you! [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 07-05-2000).] |
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Daniel_vv Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 61 |
This poem has great feelings entangled within. Well done. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
A bitersweet read, as I am going through this right now. Well written and expressed!  Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Daniel.. thank you for your compliments!! Melissa...E-mail me or chat on ICQ!!I know what your feeling!Thanks for your kind comments! |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Romantic: After reading your other poem and saw how much I related to it, I just had to read this one. Now that I have I'm amazed because I also am going through something similar. This is beautiful also. kat |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Seems as it is catching this torment we all are in. Sometimes inches become a thousand miles. Great read as I feel your pain in every word. |
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