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My Hideout, My Lair
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My Hideout, My Lair |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia 
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Welcome to my hideout Welcome to my lair Come and see whats inside Come on.....if you dare ~~ ~~ ~~ ~~ You never know what you'll find Hidden deep inside Maybe you'll find courage Tenderness and pride ~~ ~~ ~~ ~~ Maybe you'll find mixed emotions Battling against the tides Maybe it's where passion lives Or destiny abides ~~ ~~ ~~ ~~ It's a place thats hard to get to It's depth sometimes hard to reach Maybe you can reach it If it's code you can somehow breach ~~ ~~ ~~ ~~ Once the code is broken And you discover whats inside You'll be pleasantly surprised Your eyes will open wide ~~ ~~ ~~ ~~ For you have reached my everything You have reached my core You've unlocked my hideout Opened up it's door ~~ ~~ ~~ ~~ Through the door there is a pounding A heart beating just for you Capture her take her away Show her something new ~~ ~~ ~~ ~~ Now that you have reached her And have her within your sights Please make her very happy Show her pure delights ~~ ~~ ~~ ~~ She has been hidden far away For oh so very long Now she needs someone to love To hear the lovebirds song ~~ ~~ ~~ ~~ So make your way through The jungle you can see Break the code around my heart And help to set her free ~~ ~~ ~~ ~~ < !signature--> Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe [This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 07-04-2000).] |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is lovely, Tracie!! I hope someone worthy finds the key to your heart. Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Hello Lizzie  Thanks hon yep he is worthy Bye Love Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
very cool tracie-girl... this is GREAT creative and fun to read... like the repetative theme love the presentation later-cool-poet gator  jm What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly ~LaoTzeTao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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~Enigma~ Junior Member
since 2000-07-03
Posts 44St Cloud, MN |
Break the code around my heart And help to set her free Wonderful..... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tracie~ You can't hide from me ! Sweetie, this was just wonderful. I like the 'happy' in you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Janny Thanks so much, I'm glad you liked this and it's happy appeal  Tracie~ Enigma~ Thanks for reading and replying Tracie~ Hello Marge wouldn't hide from you hon Glad you liked...thanks for your wonderful reply Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Tracie, this is absolutely wonderful. Well Done enjoyed it muchly It's been too many nights of being with to now be suddenly without "Jewel" |
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Rindercella Member
since 1999-11-12
Posts 64La La Land |
Really nice. *If the shoe fits ... the castle is yours* |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Absolutely beautiful. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
DA~ Thanks hon for you lovely reply, appreciate it Tracie~ Thanks Rindercella Tracie~ A big thankyou to you as well Mark Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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