Open Poetry #8 |
silence is golden |
JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Amazing standing on your peaks untouched...untamed awakened from a winters sleep I close my eyes breathing you in silent and still the wind whispers the beautiful silence fills me up admist the tundra above the trees surrounded by your powerful beauty reminds me how small man is respectful and proud amoungst your meadows down the beavers creek so much life around that I don't see on this mountain peak walking through the aspen along your carpeted trails silence still the only sound and this silence is golden..... Julie :) |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
This is a treasure. I love those walks with nature. You have penned such wonderful imagery in this one it beckons me to go on a walk and enjoy the "golden" silence. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Julie~ This is a very golden piece, lovely read with a lovely vision Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Thank you for your kind replys.....I just hope iti s good enough for the book.... Julie :) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JulieAnn~ This is just a lovely render from your pen. A beautiful image-filled poem. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"I close my eyes breathing you in silent and still the wind whispers the beautiful silence fills me up." Beautiful description...I love to hike in the mountains...and I love to hear the wind whisper thru the palm trees...James |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Julie* What a beautiful walk......the images were breathtaking and the silence........yes, was Golden! Thank you for sharing this~ |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
what an "On the Top of the World" feeling you portray here.... |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Thank you all......I was hiking above treeline when I wrote this...I thought it could be better...glad you all liked it!! < !signature--> Julie [This message has been edited by JulieAnn (edited 07-07-2000).] |
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