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JulieAnn
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Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!!

0 posted 2000-07-04 03:35 AM


Amazing
standing on your peaks
untouched...untamed
awakened from a winters sleep

I close my eyes
breathing you in
silent and still
the wind whispers
the beautiful silence
fills me up

admist the tundra
above the trees
surrounded by your powerful beauty
reminds me how small man is

respectful and proud
amoungst your meadows
down the beavers creek
so much life around
that I don't see
on this mountain peak

walking through the aspen
along your carpeted trails
silence still the only sound
and this silence is golden.....


Julie :)



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Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
1 posted 2000-07-04 07:23 AM


This is a treasure.  I love those walks with nature.  You have penned such wonderful imagery in this one it beckons me to go on a walk and enjoy the "golden" silence.
tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
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Australia
2 posted 2000-07-04 07:38 AM


Julie~
This is a very golden piece, lovely read with a lovely vision  
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


JulieAnn
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Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!!
3 posted 2000-07-07 01:10 AM


Thank you for your kind replys.....I just hope iti s good enough for the book....

Julie :)



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4 posted 2000-07-07 01:21 AM


JulieAnn~
This is just a lovely render
from your pen.
A beautiful image-filled poem.
~*Marge*~


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JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2000-07-07 06:47 AM


"I close my eyes
breathing you in
silent and still
the wind whispers
the beautiful silence
fills me up."
Beautiful description...I love to hike in the mountains...and I love to hear the wind whisper thru the palm trees...James

Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
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Michigan
6 posted 2000-07-07 06:57 AM


Julie*
What a beautiful walk......the images were
breathtaking and the silence........yes, was
Golden!  Thank you for sharing this~

kaile
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singapore
7 posted 2000-07-07 11:35 AM


what an "On the Top of the World" feeling you portray here....
JulieAnn
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Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!!
8 posted 2000-07-07 02:05 PM


Thank you all......I was hiking above treeline when I wrote this...I thought it could be better...glad you all liked it!!   < !signature-->

Julie  




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