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Passions Love (Your Titles In My Poem)
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Passions Love (Your Titles In My Poem) |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA 
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Your Titles In My Poem (I hope that this is good enough) ~"Passions" Love~ As the "Midnight Hour" approaches, on this "Whimsical Windy Wednesday," I close my eyes and fall into dreams, wishing to be "Love-Less" no more, with my heart longing to find my "One True Love," "The Journey" that begins upon the winds of romance floating light as a "Feather" to you, your heart sings to mine like a trance, "Come To Me," gazing into the window of my soul, knowing "What I Want" by the "Look" of desire in my eyes, you hold me tenderly, already I am "In Love With You," I ask of you to "Love Me Today" "If Tomorrow Doesn't Come," for the time is now as I caress your "Sweetface," we make beautiful love together, "Forever As One," "This Love So True," "A Melting Moment," as you sink deeper into me, I breathe you, I feel you, "I Am" you as there are "No Limits" to our love sublime, the twinkling of the star's "Radiance" copies the beauty of our dance, "Expecting Oceans" of emotions to flow from the "Fireworks Of My Heart" that your love has set ablaze, but, alas, as dawn arrives, the dance must end, I whisper in your ear, "Parting Is Such Sweet Sorrow," as you whisper softly back to me, that I am "The Woman Of Your Dreams," but, sadly, I must return to "Reality," without you, one lonely tear falls from my eyes, left with the "Ache Of Again," perhaps "This Evening" we shall meet once more, oh how "I Wish," my heart cries out in sorrow, leaving a "Trail Of Tears," realizing that this was a once in a lifetime dream, "I Know That Now," as my heart's hope "Fades To Black," for it's soulmate exists only in that dream *By Melissa Honeybee*< !signature--> Many thanks to the poets whose titles I used for my poem: Janet Marie, Marge Tindal, Jmlee12345, Justbleu, Angelswing, Kat, Nona, Katherine, SEA, Leigh Anne, Rodney Belcher, Lone Wolf, Tracie66, Mark Bohannan, Rupert Evan II, A Romantic Heart, Dark Angel, Corrine, Mariee66, Tennessee Angel, Mike, Corazon, Prometheus, Michael G, Marina and ESP!!!  (thanks for reminding me Marge)The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 07-04-2000).] |
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MagnoliaBlue Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 367 |
Wow! Fantastic job! I wouldn't have had the patience...but this is really great! MagnoliaBlue ~My Skipper Jim I love you! Your Lady June~ |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Good job. Myself, I would tire simply of having to type all those "-"... jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Good job!!  |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Finally!! Someone mentions me. lol I love it Melissa!!! --You can either take me as I am...or you can watch me as I go.-- |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Melissa~ This is just wonderful. You did an exceptional job of incorporating the titles into a fully flowing piece of poetry. *Pssst - You forgot to credit my Lil' Lizzie (ESP) for 'Radiance'. I would notice that, huh ? Especially since it was dedicated to Moi` Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hey Melissa, You have done a wonderful Job incorperating all these titles!! A lovely piece, Excellent Job and Thank you for including mine Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive, my body goes on, my spirit has died, and I though alive, feel dead inside. "Rose Petal" |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Thank you everyone for replying, this was fun. Thanks Spitfire for starting this Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh Melissa what a superb effort you have done...well done and to have it flow so beautifully to I must say thanks to you for the mention of my titles  Great effort Lissa Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is great, Melissa!!! I'm honoured that my title is a part of it... And that I got recognised for it!!  Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Melissa~ YEA! Awesome job here! Wow, it is so much better than mine, maybe I'll try again later, it really is fun isn't it? SpitFire really started something with this I think.....thanks for using mine in there too! Happy 4th! -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Melissa, This was great!!!! Thank you for using my titles in your poem . . . an honor. LW Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility. --William Wordsworth |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Great job...I loved it..... Julie :) |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This flowed so well...quite creative this piece be!! I liked it a lot..and I'm not just saying that cuz, one of my titles is in it!! Cool!!! By the way Thank You!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
way to go Melis, great job... very creative.. thanks for including me... but Im with jamie WAY TOO MUCH TYPING  LOLtake care jm What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly ~LaoTzeTao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Thank you very much! Yeah, it was a lot of typing, but I love a challenge Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
This is a clever and talented way of weaving the words together, you did a fine job. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Aren't you the clever one. really enjoyed this Melissa!! I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Now this is creative!!! Thanks for using my title...you did a wonderful job! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I too say great job. Pat yourself on the back. Thanks for using mine as well and yes, thanks to Spitfire for starting a downpour of raw talent. |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Melissa, you did an amazing job with this! Thanks for including my title also. This really looks like alot of fun! kat |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Melissa, This was a wonderful idea, loved it muches. Love, Cerenity |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
I am blown alway by all the replies that I had received, thank you all so much! Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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