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Through Your Grasp |
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DestinysCharm Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 90 |
Spirit my longing eyes and float me far away address my long flowing hair with pure gentleness mesmerize my waiting ears with your soft toned voice bless all of me with your elegant scent of charm. Christen my eager lips with increasing passion envelop my smiling face into your flush mind devour my jeweled neck with your strong desires massage your fingertips deeply through my tension. Caress my loving heart with complete thoughtfulness look into my exposed soul and see peace and joy feel the mist of flavor dance upon your passion as a delighted queen I'll become through your grasp. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
This is beautiful, DestinysCharm, and gets its message across very well! Elizabeth I'm grabbing my hat and coat I'm leaving the cat a note Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town! |
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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA |
A nod, a smile, and a wink. Well done. Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn. JP "Everything is your own damn fault, if you are any good." E. Hemmingway |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Spirit my longing eyes and float me far away address my long flowing hair with pure gentleness Christen my eager lips with increasing passion envelop my smiling face into your flush mind mesmerize my waiting ears with your soft toned voice bless all of me with your elegant scent of charm. beautiful poem, lovely images. Caress my loving heart with complete thoughtfulness look into my exposed soul and see peace and joy ------------------------ "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting." E.E Cummings. manic street preachers "Culture Alienation Borebom and Despair" "I know I believe in nothing but it is my nothing" -faster MSP "And you see, I kind of shiver to conformity Did you see, the way I cower to authority, you see And my life, it's a series of compromises anyway It's a sham, and I'm conditioned to accept it all, you see" six by Paul Draper. ----- |
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DestinysCharm Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 90 |
Elizabeth, Thank you very much, I appreciate you reading and replying. JP, Thanks much, I appreciate. Brian, Thanks for your gracious reply, and for reading. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very romantic! Beautiful flow!  Denise |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Sensual in every way....Truly romantic. It takes only a minute to get a crush on someone, an hour to like someone, a day to love someone, but it takes a lifetime to forget someone. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Lovely, romantic images you've penned DestinysCharm ... a wonderful and passionate poem! Best wishes, /Kit |
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DestinysCharm Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 90 |
Denise, Thank you very much First_Knight, Thanks Kit, Thank you kindly |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
What a beautiful romantic poem ! Love it !  |
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