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You Make Me Sick Inside
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You Make Me Sick Inside |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) 
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You took my happiness < !signature-->Without a thought behind You stole my heart away And kept me captive in your way Hurting inside beyond what you know It runs so deep this pain I keep Jealousy and anger you sent to me Taking away what I hold true Me letting you take it Without a thought of wrong My guilt trapping me whole Now the truth lies close now Pain nearly unbearable to hold A major life regret now Haunting me every second Not wanting you around Never again in my sight Please go and stay away And God do not let another Like him come again this way "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown [This message has been edited by Justbleu (edited 07-04-2000).] |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wow ... that's powerful JustBleu! This one hurt just reading. I hope you'll be able to find some release from writing it out ... sure helps me all the time! Way to express it! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Painful words. jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Hope the writing took some of your pain away. Chin up m'lady.  |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Bridgette, looking at such a lovely picture, it seems impossible that anyone could make you feel this way. Whatishe - NUTS!?!?! This is one of the great things about poetry...it's an avenue to let your feelings out and it's also one of the great things about this place...there are people who care. I hope you're feeling better |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
I empathize with you, been down that dark road myself. There are those that would control us, keep us on a short leash and victimize if we let them. We are better off on our own. Best to you, Corinne |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JustBleu~ Well ... it sounds to me like you just made it all-better ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
You all are great....always here for me to lean on!! Thank you for your thoughts and comments!! Love you guys!! HUGS!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Hey, we're here for you Bridgette. . . Excellent poem!! ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Thank You Sven!! HUGS to you all....I know you are all here!! Thank You!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
very sad ... and painful to write I'm sure wishing you all the best reading these feelings ... make past memories hard to shake |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
My how sad and hurt filled. Very well written the pain at heart clearly exposed. It's amazing how these feelings of anger and despair can turn into excellent poetic expression. It's too bad that this is the hard way to do it. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thank you for saying it for me....and oh how I second Corinne's words...yes. yes. yes. thank you. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Thanks guys and gals...it does help sooo much to let these feelings out!!! Bridgette |
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