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eyesplus2
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0 posted 2000-07-03 01:51 AM



When I gave you all my wordily things....
You asked for more

When I gave you all my dreams of fairy castles on high...
You dreamed for more

When I gave you all my thoughts on life
You thought of more

When I showed you all my fears
You scared me wanting more

When I showed you all my weaknesses
You had the strength to push me for more

When I showed you all the desire I had for you
You desired even more

When I showed you all the Love I had for you
You gave me.......more

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-07-03 01:56 AM


Eyes+2~
This is just lovely.
~*Marge*~


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Enola
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2 posted 2000-07-03 10:12 AM


That last stanza is the reason why we put up with those people that everyone else hates.  Fantastic stuff.

The tragedy of it is that nobody sees the look of desperation on my face. Thousands and thousands of us, and we're passing one another without a look

SEA
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3 posted 2000-07-03 10:18 AM


Eyesplus2~ this is GREAT!   -SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB



Sudhir Iyer
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4 posted 2000-07-03 10:20 AM


eyesplus2,
now I know why you have that nickname...

You see so many beautiful things, makes me feel like eyesminus2...
wonderful poem from your heart...

regards,
sudhir

Death, be not proud, though some have called thee,
Mighty and dreadful, for thou art not so;

- John Donne

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