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I gave it all
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eyesplus2 Member
since 2000-03-02
Posts 163australia |
When I gave you all my wordily things.... You asked for more When I gave you all my dreams of fairy castles on high... You dreamed for more When I gave you all my thoughts on life You thought of more When I showed you all my fears You scared me wanting more When I showed you all my weaknesses You had the strength to push me for more When I showed you all the desire I had for you You desired even more When I showed you all the Love I had for you You gave me.......more |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Eyes+2~ This is just lovely. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Enola Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 138England |
That last stanza is the reason why we put up with those people that everyone else hates. Fantastic stuff. The tragedy of it is that nobody sees the look of desperation on my face. Thousands and thousands of us, and we're passing one another without a look |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Eyesplus2~ this is GREAT!  -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
eyesplus2, now I know why you have that nickname... You see so many beautiful things, makes me feel like eyesminus2... wonderful poem from your heart... regards, sudhir Death, be not proud, though some have called thee, Mighty and dreadful, for thou art not so; - John Donne |
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