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A True Lady's Knight
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A True Lady's Knight |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678
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A True Lady's Knight ~First Knight~ On blaze of glory and light of day, He rode his steed along the bay. A man of mercy, A man of deed. A man of passion, A man of creed. A silver glint, a flash of light. His armor gleaming, his tunic tight. Sword of justice along his side. With truth and honor, He will abide. Red and white his family crest, Respect to all, He'd give his best. Red stripes of color upon his shield, Known by all while in the field. This field of life, where we all must be. He rides the roads of liberty. To make a difference each day he lives. This his purpose. His life he gives. So ladies of this land so pure. Never trouble should you endure. He will stand by you, In times of need. He will always hear your faithful plead. If you wonder who is this man. And you ask, "Am I in his plan?" I tell you once, and hear me clear, This be the man, who loves you dear. Grace and peace, for those that seek. The man who would His lady keep For if he be your one true love, He 'll do it all, with our Father's LOVE < !signature--> It takes only a minute to get a crush on someone, an hour to like someone, a day to love someone, but it takes a lifetime to forget someone. [This message has been edited by First__Knight (edited 06-12-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
David~ Very well done. Enjoyed much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Ah...a truer knight was never found  |
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DestinysCharm Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 90 |
Excellent poem, I enjoyed, and it inspired me to write this below: She sits down on the riverside waiting for him to ride on by to catch a glimpse would delight her mind to float away and ride. She'd imagine the joy, the glee to be so precious in one's heart to envision the reasons for love knowing ne'r a dark night to flee. Reality's crest sits close waiting the shadow in the distance fading an illusion to imagine a true knight never mind the value of her own rating. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Gallantly presented, Sir Knight. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
We ladies always dream of that special Knight! This is wonderful, David! Denise [This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 06-12-2000).] |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Enchanting First_Knight ... the flow, the sentiments, simply beautiful! Best wishes, /Kit |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Great poem, you should read my poem - ' Hero's Tale ' on open poetry 6 archive, it shows the other side of the bargain and would make an excellent add on to your poem, not that it needs it, I enjoyed reading it, the flow and feeling of the poem was great and it says a lot. L.of.L. Tom . P.s. Could the line ' If you wounder who is this man ' be a reference towards God or am I just reading to much into the poem ? Insanity is a perfectly normal responce to an abnormal world -R.D.Laing.- |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Thank you all..........and Angelswing....maybe you are the only one who did read so deep.. It takes only a minute to get a crush on someone, an hour to like someone, a day to love someone, but it takes a lifetime to forget someone. |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
I think I must have been . Tom .  Insanity is a perfectly normal responce to an abnormal world -R.D.Laing.- |
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