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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
The moonlight paints the room in shades of silver and black. The only sound...your heart beating in rhythm with mine As we sway to the music of our love. Held tightly in your arms your lips tantalizingly near, Seeming to beg for my kiss And I offer up my mouth to you in willing surrender. No words are needed...no other touch Just your lips on mine As we dance in the silver moonlight. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Paula~ OOOOOOhhhhhhhh! This is ROMANTIC!  -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
*SIGH* This is totally dreamy!! Great poem, Paula!! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Sea...thats me...a closet romantic hehehe ESP...dreamy...thanks |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
boot |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
This is just a wonderful read....very poetic...liked it alot!!!  Julie :) |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Paula..... Wow.......that one hit the spot!!!! Keep 'em comin'..... Paint your words upon the eager waiting canvas of my heart.....~Sunny1~ |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Do I haer Harlequin calling? Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
JulieAnn...when you have a good man good romantic poems arent far behind Sunny...thanks it was a fun write Jamie...ROTFLMAO....Harlequin? oh please I was hoping for at least Jackie Collins |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
May I have this dance? This was wonderful. Got me to thinkin. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
my my my..this is tasty my two favorite things.. moon light and lips LOL very nice senusal work here Paula very nice indeed jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
Now that's what I'm talking about!!! ... HOTNESS ABOUNDS ... Very seductive, Paula ... Love your work ... |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
Whoa! WHOA! I'm at work here! Gulp! Hot flash, sweat on brow, raised pulse! Concentrate...concentrate. Whew, ok, composure. Ahem... Well, Paula, if you were trying to create heart problems throughout the civilized world, congrats! Oooooooh, man. I'm awake now. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
OK OK this is right up there with Mark B.'s "just a kiss"...and I suppose this was "just a dance" Beautiful writing Paula.....Iloved the description of the moonlight~ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Mark...tell me what you are thinking Janet...yes lips sweet as summer wine MA...it truly wasnt meant to be Trew...LOL guy...its only one dance Butterflies...yes just a dance...really...honest...uh huh!!!! |
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