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SEA 
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since 2000-01-18
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I am the color purple with a hint of green I am all things wished for and all things dreamed I am laughter to heal when you cry I am the friend that doesn't ask why I am beauty in the eye of the right beholder I am fire when the nights turn colder I am the answer that still makes you think I am the memory you can't drown with drink I am the song stuck in your head I am words that never were said I am the dancer you see in the rain I am the sigh on your lips that you can't refrain I am peace when you need to rest I am a mother always tending her nest I am forgiveness when you've done wrong I am steady powerful and strong I am release when you need to be free I am Susan............. otherwise known as SEA!  -SEA- Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Gee, Susan, you sound like a wonderful person but I'd have a problem with purple with a hint of green  |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Balladeer~ Hey! What's wrong with purple and a little bit of green?!LOL ~ (purple is for love and green is for jealousy)  -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
SEA . . . You are beautiful and talented!! Purple rules!!! ROFL Great writing!! LW Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility. --William Wordsworth |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Lone Wolf~ thank you! Yay for purple!! -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
This one kept my eyes to screen The flow of rhyme was great indeed Luved the way you carried it thru I'll surely be looking out for more of your works. Coco |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh Sea this is soo sweet...I like I like Wonderful read, very enjoyable. You are so sweet your writings so neat You are a wonderful poet I only hope that you know it You are a tender heart and soul I hope to keep posting is your goal Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ You are indeed shades of purple. With a little hint of green ... Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
You sound terrific!!! Great poem, Susan!! Keep em coming! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I loved this SEA! Really well done indeed! These lines gave me a double-take, they are expressed so well: "I am the friend that doesn't ask why" "I am the answer that still makes you think" "I am the memory you can't drown with drink" Really well done! Loved the thoughts here! "You are" wonderful! Best wishes, /Kit |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Sea,...I absolutely love this!!! Your words just drifted so perfectly together down the page.....I like who you are. Super job with this. Take care now. *Peace. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Coco~ I'm glad you liked this, thank you! Tracie~ you are such a sweetie and so nice....thank you for the sweet reply Marge~ Thank you for the colorful reply! Lizzie~ I'll try, thank you Kit~ Wow! you make me blush thank you SpitFire~ Thanks friend, I like who you are too! -SEA Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
This honestly made me smile....I loved it....a great self portrait.....self portraits are so hard to write and you have done a wonderful job here my friend....  Julie :) |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Fits you to a tee! I like this one very much |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
One thing I know for sure is that you are a poet with talent, great work! God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
A Wonderful self portrait, thank you! Liz |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Wow! I loved this! I think I may just send this one to my love if you don't mind. Ofcourse I'll have to change the ending a bit. LOL It's a beautiful peice that you have here Susan, otherwise known as SEA. kat |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
JulieAnn~ I'm glad you smiled, thank you WhtDove~ Thanks! Eagle One~thank you! Elizabeth~ thanksKat~ I don't mind,as long as you change it to suit you unless of course your name is Susan too LOL I'm glad you liked it that much, thank you. -SEA Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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