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MagnoliaBlue Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 367 |
In my bedroom late at night I close my eyes and dream… There's the odor of candles Shadows on the wall You are with me it would seem. To hold you and touch you I try with all my might... To see you smile To make love with you In my dreams in the night. ©2000~CJB~ ~My Skipper Jim I love you! Your Lady June~ |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Wonderful little gem  Liked this very much Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
A lovely poem. If the "white shoulders" perfume mingled with that of the candles then my thoughts are complete.. jamie |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MagnoliaBlue~ Pleasant thoughts. Enjoyed. *Prometheus ... White Shoulders ... the only fragrance there is ! ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
this is as truely beautiful pome |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
this is such a short and sweet quicky! like the last two lines very much...express the earnest longing for a loved one very well indeed |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
So beautifully said with so few words ... lovely poem Magnolia Blue! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
perfect Mag-blu... i have burned a few of these candles myself of late.. you captured it well jm What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly ~LaoTzeTao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Gossamerwings Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 207 |
Wonderful words,MaggieB. You hang in there!  < !signature-->Gossamerwings  [This message has been edited by Gossamerwings (edited 07-27-2000).] |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
A haunting feeling.....and I do love those candles .....great writing~ |
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