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MagnoliaBlue
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0 posted 2000-06-30 08:23 PM


In my bedroom late at night
I close my eyes and dream…

There's the odor of candles
Shadows on the wall
You are with me it would seem.

To hold you and touch you
I try with all my might...

To see you smile
To make love with you
In my dreams in the night.

©2000~CJB~
  




~My Skipper Jim
I love you!
Your Lady June~

© Copyright 2000 June Blanchard - All Rights Reserved
tracie66
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1 posted 2000-07-01 01:55 AM


Wonderful little gem  
Liked this very much
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Jamie
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2 posted 2000-07-01 02:01 AM


A lovely poem. If the "white shoulders" perfume mingled with that of the candles then my thoughts are complete..
jamie

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3 posted 2000-07-01 04:01 AM


MagnoliaBlue~
Pleasant thoughts.
Enjoyed.

*Prometheus ...
White Shoulders ... the only fragrance there is !


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katherine
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4 posted 2000-07-01 04:24 AM


this is as truely beautiful pome
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5 posted 2000-07-01 06:00 AM


this is such a short and sweet quicky!
like the last two lines very much...express the earnest longing for a loved one very well indeed

Kit McCallum
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6 posted 2000-07-01 07:50 AM


So beautifully said with so few words ... lovely poem Magnolia Blue!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Janet Marie
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7 posted 2000-07-01 11:21 PM


perfect Mag-blu...
i have burned a few of these candles myself of late..
you captured it well
jm

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The world calls a butterfly
~LaoTzeTao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~


Gossamerwings
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8 posted 2000-07-27 09:41 PM


Wonderful words,MaggieB.
You hang in there!  
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Gossamerwings  


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Butterflies_dont_cry
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9 posted 2000-07-27 09:53 PM


A haunting feeling.....and I do love those candles  .....great writing~
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