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Honeybee
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0 posted 2000-06-30 02:06 PM




~*SPRING PROMISE HAIKU*~

5-7-5


Beauty awakens
it's promises refresh the soul
Ah! Spring has begun

*By Melissa Honeybee*

© Copyright 2000 Melissa P. Long-Monette - All Rights Reserved
brian madden
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1 posted 2000-06-30 02:11 PM


YIPPIEEE... a Melissa haiku, my brain still can't break the words down in order to write a haiku but I sure love them. beautiful Melissa.


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SEA
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2 posted 2000-06-30 09:31 PM


Melissa~ I just love these Haikus of yours!  -SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB



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3 posted 2000-06-30 09:37 PM


You're just a natural for these, Melissa!  
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4 posted 2000-07-01 06:24 AM


so much truth within the first two lines...impressed at how you compact spring's delights into itsy-bitsy twelve syllables!!


Yippee Ah Ah Yeah!
Wonderous sounds fill the air
Spring Vitality!

Kit McCallum
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5 posted 2000-07-01 07:25 AM


Well done Melissa!  You're great at these ... always a pleasure to read!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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6 posted 2000-07-02 08:08 AM


It is very refreshing - thank you for the mellow thought.
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7 posted 2000-07-02 09:54 AM


Lovely, Melissa!!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

Honeybee
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8 posted 2000-07-02 12:00 PM



Thank you everyone, I'm so glad that you enjoy my haikus as much as I enjoy writing them  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee

Kaile:  Thanks for writing your haiku               


The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly

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