Open Poetry #8 |
Spring Promise Haiku |
Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
~*SPRING PROMISE HAIKU*~ 5-7-5 Beauty awakens it's promises refresh the soul Ah! Spring has begun *By Melissa Honeybee* |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
YIPPIEEE... a Melissa haiku, my brain still can't break the words down in order to write a haiku but I sure love them. beautiful Melissa. "monuments put from pen to paper turns me into a gutless wonder" Manic street preachers |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Melissa~ I just love these Haikus of yours! -SEA Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
You're just a natural for these, Melissa! |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
so much truth within the first two lines...impressed at how you compact spring's delights into itsy-bitsy twelve syllables!! Yippee Ah Ah Yeah! Wonderous sounds fill the air Spring Vitality! |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Well done Melissa! You're great at these ... always a pleasure to read! Best wishes, /Kit |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
It is very refreshing - thank you for the mellow thought. |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Lovely, Melissa!!! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Thank you everyone, I'm so glad that you enjoy my haikus as much as I enjoy writing them Take care, Melissa Honeybee Kaile: Thanks for writing your haiku The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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