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jbowie Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 135BANGOR (that OR) ME |
the scent of dirty clothes drifts as the lazy dog turns in circles A red rimmed man has tired eyes watching for his fate which settle on my hands that are filled with the devils work even though they hardly stop moving but the eyes never waiver as the noose cracks |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
spooky and disturbing--and I liked it very much...love how you brought out the senses-- or how the senses brought out me...lol...loved it, but have to wonder what Dr. Freud would say about that... thanks... |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
A haunting rendering of images here jbowie! Really well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Outstanding point of reference piece...good writing! Thank you for this. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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