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Forever as One (repost) |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind 
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In my arms I hold you Gentle Adoring Is my love. Entwined we are In rhapsody Of emotions That quiver inside. Wake me not from slumber As I delight in Your scent Your touch Your warmth. Lay with me In silence Feel our hearts beat In chorus. Hold me now Until the dawn Kiss me tender Overpower That which I feel Love me Feel me surrender. To you My heart belongs Forever Beat as one. [This message has been edited by mariee66 (edited 06-29-2000).] |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
very beautiful mariee ... you've got my heart pounding  Rex}>{{{{o> |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
A pulse quickner. I am having a sleep over........lol Like it. Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Hello twinny  great piece of writing...enjoyed the read very much your fellow 66er Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow, this is beautiful, so very well expressed and deeply touching, this would be a great addition to the book, please take my vote Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"Entwined we are In rhapsody Of emotions That quiver inside." Very nicely penned Mariee! Lovely flow and sweetly romantic sentiments ... well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mariee~ I like ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is beautiful!! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Thank you all for reading and for all your wonderful comments! (HI TWIN!) Marie~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
perfect marie sweet, spicey, tender ... wonderful writing lovely read take care, jm What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly ~LaoTzeTao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Reminds me of the doors song, "Come On baby light My Fire!"..hehe! great poem! |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
HEY!!!! RH Took my line LOL I was thinking the exact same thing LOL All my love, Jeffrey |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Hey...I know that song RH and Jeffrey! "Try to set the night on fire" Glad you liked my poem!  Marie~ |
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