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let go to myself these children
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let go to myself these children |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii 
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One feeling three times celebrate our loss and mourn. Be blind stay inside and still reach and claim your peace. I am eating myself alive and I can't hear anyone. Kindly, Redheart Angrybraids |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
blind eye , can't hear....do i sense some fear? very sublime jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
man o man, do I know this...sometimes I feel like we write to each other in secret code...you have a way with opposing metaphor that befuddles but effectively produces anxiety in this reader....thanks alot redheart...lol...love the pic, too.. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is very good and I hear and see a lot in this piece. Are you OK? If you ever need a shoulder, I am here. Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Enola Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 138England |
Thanks for the reply to my poem, and the fact that it drew me to read this one. It's stunning. Rather brutal, but very effective. The tragedy of it is that nobody sees the look of desperation on my face. Thousands and thousands of us, and we're passing one another without a look of recognition. |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
yes this rather vague and undescriptive, though, it does have personal meaning, i'm sorry not to explian. it's a route of emotions, kindly, myself to yourself and living< !signature--> Kindly, Redheart Angrybraids [This message has been edited by redheart angrybraids (edited 07-03-2000).] |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i like this....it seems to convey powerful emotions without directly telling the reader about its pain and anguish....i like poems which make the reader think a little  |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
kaile=hello, thank you for reading, i to like poems that make you wonder. Kindly, Redheart Angrybraids |
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