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See you in July
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See you in July |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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See you in July To look at you to breathe you in to hold you close, ‘tis no sin to disrobe you thus and not in my mind to feel our limbs intertwine to kiss your lips to feel your arms to caress your neck taste love’s charms, to gaze at you with these green eyes makes loving you heady all the days of July. don't you just love it when my mind wanders.... |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Sunshine: Wow! Now I'm hot and I don't know what to do with it. AHHHHHH!!! Where is my guy when I need him???. As I was reading your poem I felt the intensity of every single word. It's great when your mind wonders isn't it. lol. I loved it!! Thanks for sharing  kat |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You're quite welcome, Kat! Thanks for reading... Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
The Poem belongs to July....A red hot number.. jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Jamie, how kind of you to stop on by! Thanks! Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sunshine, WOW!!! I can feel the heat already!!!! LOL Great poem!! Lone Wolf Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility. --William Wordsworth |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
The heat is on.... why do I rememebr this song all of a sudden... maybe it is the date: 30 of June : today... Karilea, hmmm, interesting thoughts... well written as always... regards, sudhir. Death, be not proud, though some have called thee, Mighty and dreadful, for thou art not so; - John Donne |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"to disrobe you thus and not in my mind to feel our limbs intertwine" Loved that verse above ... Wow! Let that mind keep wandering Sunshine! Wonderful poem ... perfect! Best wishes, /Kit |
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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Sunshine - Oh, that my mind would wander as yours does.....Me, I'm usually thinking about all the dirty laundry, washing windows, mowing the grass, etc, etc, etc....I think now I'll let in go in another direction..... This is wonderful. Bonnie |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
LoneWolf...I'll get the fan... Sudhir...Soon, you can turn the calendar... Kit, thanks for pointing out the verse you like...that always pleases me... Bonnie, if kids are around, make sure you only let your mind wander at the appropriate [oops] time... Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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