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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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~*FaerieTale*~ ~*Marge Tindal*~  With auburn tresses spun in curl dances a faeried green-eyed girl Lazied daisies hold her fair this girl of the auburn hair Spinning tales of merriment spreading love so Heaven sent Laughter plays from deep within Tiptoeing lightly about the glen Ducking in and out with delight this auburn-haired faerie sprite Wings a'flutter whispers sighs caught in a moment of surprise Should you venture into the glen you'll surely catch this faeried friend As you sit in the quietude of night upon your shoulder she will light Whispering faerie of auburned tress holds your heart in sweet caress Feeling like you've just met fate What a difference faeries make * For Corinne ... for her inspiration ! * *For believing in me* ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
A true Fearie Tale Marge. Beautiful !  |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
A magical poem sprinkled with faerie dust. wonderful. Is the cute faerie hoovering on the screen seeing anyone? I don't care if she she is only 8 inchs tall. lol ------------------------ "I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else"-Richey Edwards "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "Libraries gave us power Then work came and made us free What price now for a shallow piece of dignity" Nicky Wire, A design for Life. manic street preachers "Outside open mouthed crowds Pass each other as if they're drugged Down pale corridors of routine Where life falls unatoned " "To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting." E.E Cummings. |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
A beautifully told tale, Marge! Elizabeth I'm grabbing my hat and coat I'm leaving the cat a note Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Munda~ Glad you liked it. Brian~ The Faeries are always there ! Thanks for liking. Elizabeth~ Thank you, hon. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Marge -- This is fantastic! Brings back girlhood dreams of Tinkerbell and all the lovely things that only a child-like heart can dream up. Thanks for a lovely, enchanting read! "That man has shown himself great who has never grieved in evil days and never bewailed his destiny." --Seneca |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I loved the flow in this Marge, and what a wonderful "fairy" tale ... I adored it! Well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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nando Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 87Vaxjo, Smaland, Sweden |
You never stop amazing me Marge... Really loved this one, It had an old Irish ring to it I think. The rythm is nice, and your choice of words lifts it even higher... Waiting for the next one allready... -nando- Ask me how to live your life, and this to you I´ll say: make your choises true and wise, so that when tomorrow will arise, you´ll smile at yesterday... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
TennesseeAngel~ Ahhhhhhh ! There is magic in the heart of a child - and grownups who still believe. Thanking you for your sweet response. Kit~ We flit amongst the faeries as delightful thoughts take wing. Thank you for your always kind replies. Nando~ Ah, yes ! The Irish touch of faerie kiss, softened on the wings of bliss. I hope I can deliver more to please you. Thank you for the response. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Wow!! Fragile, graceful and delicately beautiful!! |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Marge, How do you do it??????? Man,err, woman  this is amazingAll my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Wow, Marge!!! I am so - well, speechless! So very, very sweet of you, you really made my day, dear lady! What a lovely Irish Tale! Thank you, thank you, thank you! Corinne |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
 What lovely sentiments! You pen the love for another better than anyone else Marge, this is beautiful!! Thank you for sharing this*~ |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Fairy, fairy good, Marge!!! A wee bit o de Irish in you on display here |
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Lorraine Nisbet Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 218Jersey City, NJ USA |
Marge~ Wonderful...Wonderful...I love it!! ~Lorraine A great poet is nothing more....than a discovered amateur |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
So delicate, so sweet, so beautiful. Excellent Marge! as always Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Insect~ I'm glad it 'WOW'-ed you. Thank you. Jeffrey~ I reckon the Faerie Muse lit on my shoulder and whispered it in my ear. Glad you enjoyed. Corinne~ My goodness ! I thank YOU for the sheer inspiration of this piece. ButterfliesDC~ Awwww ! What a lovely thing to say. I just let my heart speak. You can thank Corinne for the inspiration for this one. Balladeer~ Ah ! It is so ! Lorraine~ Thank you so much. DarkAngel~ The Faerie thanks you, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Yes, I know a faerie like that, she sits on the end of my pen, while I write... lol...... Great poem....Margie Parker |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Parker~ Perhaps we know the same Faerie ? Here's *winking* at you ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is lovely, Marge!! Only you could write this gracefully. Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Good morning Marge, This is perfect, I just LOVE it. You touched my heart with this one because I love fairy's thank you so much for sharing this my friend. Love, Cerenity |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Awww Marge,....I love this. I'm going to have to get me one of these fairies you speak of. So well done,...I'm telling you, your work should be in a book 'Mam...I mean it. . Take care, and thank you for the soft and beautiful poem this morning. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lil' Lizzie~ Awww ! What a sweetie you are ! Thank you, my little 'mentee' and friend. Cerenity~ I would have figured you for a 'Faerie' person ... from your gentle ways ! Glad you enjoyed. SpitFire~ What a nice compliment to make my day. Dispatching, POST HASTE ... one Faerie. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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shilpi Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 73 |
Marge, what a cutey cute little Faerie Tale.....I'd love to read more of these !!  Regards, shilpi |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Shilpi~ Thank you ... and so would I ! I'll have to await the return of the Faerie Muse ! ~*Marge~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh Marge I just love fairy's and if I could say what I was to come back as in another life I would definately come back as a fairy. So cute, mystical, magical and mischievous Lovely as usual Marge A big smile from me Luv Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tracie~ Thanks, hon ... for the endearing thought of you as a Faerie. I'm really pleased that you found joy in this little poem. Thanks for the e-mail. Keep the smile. Love you~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Marge, you are too modest! i am plenty sure i will like what i can find A beauty as always...(whining like a little kid)Life isn't fair...why the faerie muse speaks to her and NOT to me? anyway, here's hoping the faerie muse speaks to you soon.... |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Possesed of beauty your words speak clear Once again ,oh Marge , we hear ! Doc |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I gotta say this is now one of my favorites...lets see that makes the number way up there in the...gosh..thinking here...well lots. Wonderful poem!! |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
such imagination here...I loved it.... as usual Great writing...... Julie :) |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Ah, such light and lovely beauty Marge...this is gorgeous work indeed. *Krista Knutson* "Cherish your vision; Cherish your ideals; Cherish the music that stirs in your heart, the beauty that forms in your mind, the loveliness that drapes your purest thoughts. If you remain true to them, your world will at last be built." ~James Allen~ "We've made houses for hatred...it's time we made a place where people's souls may be seen and made safe"...~Jewel~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kaile~ Funny you are ... love it. I'm listening for when she speaks again. Dr.Moose~ Thank you so much for your little rhyme. Martie~ You're a kick ! I love you. JulieAnn~ I appreciate your thoughts. Krista~ I am so glad that you enjoyed it. I had fun writing it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Marge, this was great! I really enjoyed this one. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Eloise~ Thank you, dear. It was a fun one to write. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Yes, what a difference, indeed! This is a delightful tale of whimsy, Miss Marge! ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Claire~ I'm glad you like this little charmer. Have I told you how WONDERFUL it is to have you back in here sharing your beautiful poetry. See ... I do believe in Faeries ! ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
WOW, Where was I when all this was happening ??? real glad that I could read this... Lovely, lovely work, Marge... regards, sudhir. Death, be not proud, though some have called thee, Mighty and dreadful, for thou art not so; - John Donne |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ah, Sudhir~ Ye may have been asleep in the garden where the Faeries play. They can sprinkle your eyelids with magical Faerie dust ... awaken now and smile ! Thank you, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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