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thug-a-licious
Junior Member

since 2000-08-08

Posts 27

0 posted 2000-08-09 09:39 PM

~ This poem is about my lost love , and not the person most of my poetry is about!~

    Many, many years ago I fell in love. He was like an angel sent to me from the heavens above.
   The instant I saw him my heart stopped , and every other guy in view was blocked.
    I wanted to be with him desperatly, and i jumped for joy when I found out he felt the same for me.
    Those shocking blue eyes chilled my soul, the stories of his life broke my heart.
     Andy was my other half, Andy made me whole. He should have been my first kiss, my first slow dance, he should have been my first, but I know now I'll never get that chance.
    We ended badly, I broke his heart now I regret we ever did part.
  I'll never find another guy who completes me like he did , and I hate myself every day for letting him go, for being stupid.
   I got a chance to bring him back to me, a chance to be together again with my first love , my friend.
But he left me and moved to another state, all I want is one more chance but I guess thats a chance I'll never get to take!
   My body aches through and through, my heart aches even more, I've hoped and I've prayed for us to be together just like before.
   All I know and all I feel is my dearest Andy I love you still!!!

This one may not be very good but I had to get it out of my system.

The_Driven
Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 60

1 posted 2000-08-09 09:42 PM

They say the best poetry comes from the heart. Nice expressing yourself. Keep up the good work.

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
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2 posted 2000-08-09 10:16 PM

Good work...I'm sorry things didn't work out with your guy, but I believe in fate very strongly... and if it was meant to be, it will. Sooner or later. I wish you the best.
Jenn

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

3 posted 2000-08-09 11:33 PM

thug~~~if it was meant to be one day he will come back to you...and i wish you the best till that day...keep your hopes up...and if you get the chance dont let it pass you up...

~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~

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