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I am worthless (please read)
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I am worthless (please read) |
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Silent soul Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 73tx,usa |
I am worthless it's plain to see I am worthless a failure thats me I am worthless from head to toe I am worthless but who would know I am worthless cant you see I am worthless just leave me be I am worthless just let me die I am worthless that is NO lie I am worthless just let me kill I am worthless but I can TRY to heal I am worthless peace be with you I am worthless never again shall I feel blue I am worthless I know it's true but tell me am I worthless to you1 Tell me what ya think! and if ya like it I'll post more it just depends! peace <3 Silent Life is to short to be pissed off all the time |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
oh well, the poems really good, flows very nicely...but i fear the idea of worhtlessness. you should never thing of yourself so unworthy, then again i do not know the depths of the poem, but feel free to email me if you wanna talk... salooma |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
I agree, no one is worthless. The poem has nice form. Keep up the good writing. ,._-=-~^* Jeremy *^~-=-_., |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Soul, you are only what you make of yourself. The only people who are truely worthless are those who give up on themselves and on life. I hope you can see that, my friend. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Stop that! I'm a Mom of six kids and just for a minute, I'm going to be your Mom, You are a precious and a wonderfully unique creation of God, He has a plan that is all yours. Find it within yourself. Y ou are only as wothy as you love others. So do that! I'm counting on you to BE the the best you can and to go out and make a difference today, if only to smile at someone who looks like they need one! End of lecture! You also have a wonderful talent as a poet, use it to get out all those feelings, this works, it has for me. love and hugs from your ciber Mom Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
You can obviously write, and that makes you worth something. I bet you there are other things you can do too, and that makes you even worth more. Get where i'm getting at? Keep writing  As i wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Worthless? i think not. You and your poetry is worth so much to us Please post more so we can all check it out! |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
I really like your poem. I didn't see it as if you were condemning yourself, the end is an obvious rebuttal to the rest of the piece. I thought you were expressing your own hurt at having been rejected and belittled by those who don't really know you. After being treated like a worthless person, you were low on self confidence and are asking for a person who will love you and admire you. You added a definate message of hope right there at the end. Maybe I'm way off. Anyway, I liked it. *~Meredith~* Somebody stop the world, I want to get off! *me |
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Silent soul Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 73tx,usa |
Thanks all of you! it helps me just to know some people do care! Ellie- Thanks I'm glad you care, and that's why I write poetry to help get my feelings that I can't express through some other way(if that made any sense) I'll post some more later, but just to let yall know most of my poetry isn't exactly very happy peace <3 Silent Life is to short to be pissed off all the time |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I feel like that sometimes, but don't fear I hear that those feelings fade eventually. Good work, and good luck to you. Jenn |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
We all have our moments when we feel like we mean nothing, but those are but demons that are within us. I'm a teenager as well and it's interesting 'cause the older I'm getting(I'm 19 now) the sillier things seem to me. Like the things I worried about in high school are just so ridiculous. Granted that I get that way from time to time, but the older I get and the more I learn academically I have ben able to step back and look at how silly it was for me to search for my identity within the mainstream of media and their 'perfections'. But that's me. I loved the poem and I relate to it as you can tell lol, and I hope u may write more because believe it or not, the more u write these feelings, the better you will feel too. So don't go getting discouraged if many do not reply back Good luck Sorry about the length of this reply lol |
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Fairy Princess Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 64Fitchburg Ma, USA |
Hey never feel like your worth less. Cause everyone is worth something feel free to email me...  Keep hope in you, Keep, dreams in you, And you'll be fine - Unknown |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
I know the feeling, but believe me, you are not worthless! Nobody is worthless-really. So keep that in mind-keep writing Bel |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Well I've always felt worthless and this poem was really good.I think you should keep posting poems you have a real talent!Keep up the great work. Lauren |
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Silent soul Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 73tx,usa |
Thanks ya'll you make me feel like I'm worth something thanks for that feeling! peace <3 Silent Life is to short to be pissed off all the time |
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