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Teen Poetry #3

The Fear

Lurdburger
Junior Member

since 2000-08-05

Posts 39
Carlisle, Cumbria, England

0 posted 2000-08-07 07:24 AM

I have a fear;
I'm afraid of an idea
That I had when you were away.
It was borne of doubt,
And raised by absence.

I have a fear;
I'm afraid that hearts are blackboards.
Did you write my name on yours?

I have a fear;
I'm afraid of chalk mortality.

I have a fear;
I'm afraid of your finger.
Has it cleansed your blackboard of my name?

[This message has been edited by Lurdburger (edited 08-07-2000).]

Salooma
Senior Member

since 2000-01-28

Posts 781

1 posted 2000-08-07 12:19 PM

Great post! Nice metaphor you've implied in this piece...makes it all the more interesting!

Salooma

LyricFetish
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 528
North Carolina

2 posted 2000-08-07 03:20 PM

Wow, very cool poem! I'm impressed! Awesome work, my friend.

*~Meredith~*

I want to publish scenes
And rage against machines
I want to pierce my tongue,
It doesn't hurt, it feels fine......
*Harvey Danger

SweetPoet17
Member

since 2000-08-04

Posts 108

3 posted 2000-08-08 07:17 AM

hey awesome poem! I really enjoyed it.
-jess-

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