Teen Poetry #3 |
A Best Friend |
CharliesBaby New Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 2 |
A bestfriend is someone who will always be there for you, To laugh with you, to cry with you and to always see you through. A best friend is someone who will never stab you in the back, who will always be by your side and to put you on the right track. A best friend is someone who will do anything to make you smile, who will themselves look dumb but know it was all worth while. A best friend is someone who will never leave you for a guy, cause they know in the end the guy will only make them cry. A best friend is someone who will never let you down, who would walk a hundred miles just to take away your frown. A best friend is someone who will talk to you all night long, who will encourage you in all you do and tell you to be strong. I looked for a long time and i found out that it's true that Dawn Rene Stout, My best friend is you! |
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Lone Insomniac Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 45 |
hey !! nice poem...!! =) i think it's a bit messy (too many words after eachother) but the poem itself is great !!! keep up the good work !!! greetz -Robin- |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions CharliesBaby! This is a wonderful tribute to friendship, and the flow is lovely! A terrific first post ... hope to read more! (check your e-mail for a special message) Best wishes, /Kit |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
Welcome to Passions!! Great poem, thanks for sharing it. It reminds me of a friend of mine too....how sweet! Salooma |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
welcome to passions!!! i hope that you like it here...this was a good first post...i think that all of us have a friend like that...i know that i do... ~No one is worth your tears, and the one who is wont make you cry~ ~We all cant be stars but we all can twinkle~ |
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GodsPerfktAngel Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 28Ohio |
Hey!!!!! I love the poem it totally ROX!!!!! but the thing I want to know is....why am I not your best friend?!?!?! ANYWAYS... your poem is good~~~ BYE!!! Jocelyn marie Cosgray |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Welcome to Passions!That poem reminded me of my best friend.Keep up the awsome work I cant wait to read more. LaUrEn |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Welcome to Passions! Thanks for sharing your poem, it was good |
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lupigirl Junior Member
since 2000-06-16
Posts 19Mequon, Wisconsin |
Cute poem! I have a best friend... his name is Andre... Thank you for reminding me why I love him so much... SMILE!! |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!~ This was a great first post. Bestfriends are almost a neciesity in life. And im so privelaged to have 2 of them =)I love this quote i read somewhere.."Friends are angels that lift us up off our feet when our wings have trouble remebering how to fly." Keep writing* ~!*DQ*!~ "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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