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Teen Poetry #3

Back in My life

Tamma

Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

0 posted 2000-08-06 06:51 PM

What gives you the right,
To walk back in my life?

You get my heart involved,
And disappear again.

You say your back,
And its for good.

I never noticed,
How much love I have.

Till you walked back in,
And I fell again.

If you love someone dont put their name in a heart, put their name in a circle, because a heart can be broken but a circle is continious.

Kyle Finn
Junior Member

since 2000-08-05

Posts 36
Linn, MO USA

1 posted 2000-08-06 08:17 PM

hey you have such a great style of writing, keep it up your poems are great

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

2 posted 2000-08-06 09:17 PM

tamma~~~this is good...you must really love this guy if you let him back in your heart when he disappeared before...keep up the good work...i like your poems...you are talented...

~No one is worth your tears, and the one who is wont make you cry~

~We all cant be stars but we all can twinkle~

TopGunLauren
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

3 posted 2000-08-06 10:14 PM

I love reading your poems they relate to my life.Keep up the awsome work!
Lauren

Salooma
Senior Member

since 2000-01-28

Posts 781

4 posted 2000-08-06 11:01 PM

great post Tamma...love the way you present them....such simple style...

salooma

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