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Teen Poetry #3

Finally found love...

Broken_Heart
Member

since 2000-07-24

Posts 57
Netherlands

0 posted 2000-08-06 05:56 PM

Finally Found Love

My heart yurns for you
It screams your name
I long for your touch
And to see your face
You are my dream
I finally found love

Your angelic voice
I wish to hear
To drown in your eyes
I dream of every night
To give you that kiss
To seal our love

I miss you each day
And I never loved
Anyone as much as you
You are there
And I am here
Yet together are we

You are my muze
In my dreams you live
You are my light
I need in the dark
With this I say
I love you, Ellenoor...

-Dedicated to Ellenoor-

Darkness upholds Light as much as Holiness downs the Evil within...

Kyle Finn
Junior Member

since 2000-08-05

Posts 36
Linn, MO USA

1 posted 2000-08-06 06:01 PM

very good poem, brings out your feelings, great job keep it up

TopGunLauren
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

2 posted 2000-08-06 08:19 PM

Great poem I enjoyed it keep up the great work!
Lauren

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

3 posted 2000-08-06 10:47 PM

Good poem...i like it...and i wish you the best of luck with this girl...did you give her this poem???

~No one is worth your tears, and the one who is wont make you cry~

~We all cant be stars but we all can twinkle~

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

4 posted 2000-08-06 10:47 PM

oops sorry i made a mistake!!!font>< !signature-->

~No one is worth your tears, and the one who is wont make you cry~

~We all cant be stars but we all can twinkle~

[This message has been edited by ERIN (edited 08-06-2000).]

Salooma
Senior Member

since 2000-01-28

Posts 781

5 posted 2000-08-06 10:50 PM

Great post...true love is hard to find...stick to it!

Salooma

Broken_Heart
Member

since 2000-07-24

Posts 57
Netherlands

6 posted 2000-08-07 05:09 AM

I did show her the poem ERIN, and she was very happy with it

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Salooma, I know how hard true love is to find
Each time I thought I found it, it betrayed me... But with Ellenoor, I Finally Found Love!

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