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Teen Poetry #3

2 new poems

Tamma

Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

0 posted 2000-06-18 09:21 AM

Im being lazy today and only making one post for 2 poems....

"Floating"
He said he loves me,
Or was I dreaming?

When I think of him,
I can't help but smile.

Always in my heart,
As well as my mind.

When I think of him,
There's just no one else.

He's the one I want,
No one else will do.

"One"
I want you,
To hold me.

For you to kiss me,
Anywhere you want.

To feel your breath,
Against my neck.

I want us,
to be one.

For you to hold me,
Against your body.

The two of us,
To become one.

(if ya ever wanna chat, you can IM me on AOL: sexikitticat -or- Poetic Bliss 82)

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

1 posted 2000-06-18 03:24 PM

i like these two poems. and i can see your longing for love here. and i hope that you get what you want.

I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul

Angel
Senior Member

since 1999-07-02

Posts 551
Pennsylvania

2 posted 2000-06-18 04:08 PM

You really love someone

. These poems are beautiful and I wish you luck, too.

~Susie

"If we could read the secret history of our enemies, we should find in each man's life sorrow and suffering enough to disarm all hostility."
~Henry W

Snickers
Member

since 2000-05-25

Posts 88
East Haddam, CT

3 posted 2000-06-19 10:57 AM

Tamma,
You must really be devoted to this person.

Is it the same person that you write all these poems about?? I like your work, but I think that you could make it easier for ppl to feel your emotions if you elaborated more. Good job, but I'd like to see more elaboration. Keep up the great work!!

~<3 Alwayz~
**Nikki**

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~"Love can sometimes be magic. But magic can sometimes...just be an illusion."
"Of all the words of tongue or pen, the saddes

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

4 posted 2007-12-01 10:50 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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