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They Say The World Is Small
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FeMaLe SeNzAsiaN Junior Member
since 2000-08-04
Posts 20 |
They Say The World Is Small They say the world is small, but I believe it's rather large So many different people, in places near and far And as my life twists and turns from one moment to another I know without a doubt that God made us for each other You've opened up my eyes, you've opened up my heart You opened up my soul and reached the deepest part And when I wake up beside you, in morning's early light I could cry a million tears of happiness that you are in my life You are the sun, the moon, the stars and so much more You are everything I love, everything I could live for And everytime I look into your beautiful emerald eyes I see every shining star from heaven's endless skies Your faith and understanding brings out the best in me Loving you forever is my one and only destiny We've survived the ups and downs, the aches and shakes and breaks As long as we've got each other, love is all it takes We've found each other's hearts in this world so big and strange And even till my final breath my love for you will never change. ~I dedicate this with all my heart to my one 'n only eternal angel, Krayzee D, baby I love you and will always be here for you. Thanks for making me smile through all of life's tears, fears, and drama~ |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
This was absolutly beautiful! I loved it...this person obviously means soo much to you. I wish i was as lucky to find someone liek that! My time will come..lol too bad it wont come faster. but again..absolutly beautiful...i loved it **DQ "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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SweetPoet17 Member
since 2000-08-04
Posts 108 |
THAT WAS ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL!!! -Jessica- |
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thebeautybrat Member
since 2000-03-30
Posts 114Florida |
"And even till my final breath my love for you will never change." i love that line!! i love your work too!! great job!! i ove the way you show your feelings so clearly!! i look forward to reading your other poems too!! Love is the greates feeling of all...but heartbreak is the worst feeling you can imagine. |
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thug-a-licious Junior Member
since 2000-08-08
Posts 27 |
Your poetry never seems to get old to me . I love all your poems they are soooo heartfelt and beautiful. All of them seem to touch my heart in one way or another. It seems to me u put all your heat and soul into them and that to me is what makes u such a great poet! U say that u are a true fan of mine well I'm and even bigger fan of yours! i hope to see more of your beautiful poems soon. |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
"We've found each other's hearts in this world so big and strange And even till my final breath my love for you will never change." This is a BEAUTIFUL love poem, my friend. You have great talent. Keep up the good work! "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
Ahhh....this is the sweetest and most beautiful poem!! I could get all teary right now, but I'll handle it  Breathtaking! Salooma |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
oh wow...i dont know what to say...this is one of the sweetest poems that i have ever read...keep up the good work...you have a way with the words!!! ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This poem is truly amazing, it flowed great and was filled with such true emotion. Spectacular  |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Do you have to make me cry? I'm glad I read this poem As i wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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