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Constantly keep moving and find my heart...drive...
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Constantly keep moving and find my heart...drive... |
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Lone Insomniac Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 45 |
Drive who will be my chauffeur....? to ride....till the ends.... of this universe ...I live in.... Drive, drive, right into my heart can’t we just go on ? the dashboard....shakes in time... like the past his song ...I always rhyme... Drive, drive, right into my heart why am I always here ? when I...fasten the seatbelt.... the air I hear... ...sweeps the fell... Drive, drive, right into my heart why does it hurts so much ? the blood...swiped from the... once clear glass... ...messed the engine... Drive, drive, right into my heart hit the brakes before it falls apart Drive, drive, right into my heart hit the brakes before it falls apart drive, drive, drive, drive.... |
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SweetPoet17 Member
since 2000-08-04
Posts 108 |
Interesting with yet such a powerful meaning. -jessica- |
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BigPimpinSk8tr Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 17Chambersburg, PA, USA |
Incredible. Such a powerful meaning, but such a blatant point. I loved it, it moved me so much to read some of those strong emotions flowing. Keep up the phat work. " If what i am is what i have and what i have is lost, then who am i?" - unknown Big Pimpin Sk8tr (a.ka. Thy Wizard) |
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Kyle Finn Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 36Linn, MO USA |
thats intense but powerful and has lots of meaning behind it, good job man keep it comin......  |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions Lone Insomniac! What a powerful first post ... very emotional! Hope to read more! (check your e-mail for a special message) Best wishes, /Kit |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Not only was you poem very pwerful it was also very awsome.Keep up the great work I hopw to be reading more of your poems soon. Lauren |
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