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GodsPerfktAngel Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 28Ohio |
When I am wrapped up in your arms, I feel no pain I feel no harm. When we are close,when we are near, There is no worry.no doubt ,no fear. When you took your hand and soflty touched my face, I felt your soft kiss and your warm embrace. When we are always together, I hope and wish it would always last forever. When we are alone,just me and you, I think to myself"Is this really happening,could all this be true?" I hope you can realize I hope you can see That no one else seems as perfkt as you so with me. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
First of all, Welcome to Passions!!!  This is a great expression of your feelings towards the person you care for. Love it. Kepp writing and I'll keep reading As i wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions GodsPfktAngel! What a lovely first post! Such sweet and tender thoughts ... hope to read more! (check your e-mail for a special message) Best wishes, /Kit |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
welcome to passions!!! i really liked this poem...this person must be really special...keep up the good work...this was a good first post!!! ~No one is worth your tears, and the one who is wont make you cry~ ~We all cant be stars but we all can twinkle~ |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
that was good! I really like it! Iknow how that feels! Luv, ~*~sweetstuff~*~ ~¤*¤~iF yOu LuV sOmEoNe, PuT ThEiR nAmE iN a CiRcLe, iNsTeAd Of A hEaRt, BcUz HeArTz CaN bReAk, BuT CiRcLeZ gO oN 4eVeR~¤*¤~ |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
Great poem! Welcome to passions ofcourse! And what a wonderful way you've expressed your love, beautiful words that I hope will ring forever for you! Salooma |
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