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What I Felt That Night
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What I Felt That Night |
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Misty Blue Junior Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 44 |
This is a bit Deep What I Felt That Night Suddenly I seemed to be drawn to you Finally You spoke to me Carelessly I left with you Definitely Is what you said to yourself Immaturely I fell into you Confusingly You succeeded to change my life Secretly Is how it should have been kept Lonely Is how I felt when you left Obviously I've learned from my mistakes Occasionally I think of you Accidentally We made a baby |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Wow~ I really liked this. IT flows very nicely. And im sorry to hear about what happened. But everything happens for a reason. Stay strong and things will get better  )~!*DancinQueen*!~ "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
That poem was pretty pwerful and it hit pretty close to me because that's exactly what happened to my friend.I know it's hard but eventually things will get better. Lauren |
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Misty Blue Junior Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 44 |
Hi! I just wanted everyone to know that no this particular situation did not happen to me I don't have a baby. I wrote this to show the different emotions a female can go through in the presence of being caught up. Thanks for reading and Stay Tru. [This message has been edited by Misty Blue (edited 08-05-2000).] |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
Nice form, it flows real well, keep up the good work! .,-=-~^* Jeremy *^~-=-,. |
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SweetPoet17 Member
since 2000-08-04
Posts 108 |
excellent poem...truly... -jessica- |
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Kyle Finn Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 36Linn, MO USA |
thats a big responsibility and it musta been hard but itll get better and everything has its own purpose, the poem was great  |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
oh wow!!! i dont know what to say...this is a good poem...2 thumbs up for you...im happy to hear that this didnt happen to you...but you wrote about it very good...i give you props for this poem...keep up the good work... ~No one is worth your tears, and the one who is wont make you cry~ ~We all cant be stars but we all can twinkle~ |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
wow...great poem...hard feelings. wish you luck with all, but overall the poem is awesome. keep writing! salooma |
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