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Tamma
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0 posted 2000-08-02 06:28 PM


We talk like it ain’t nothin’,
But no one knows whats hidden.

I seem to have gotten good,
At hiding my shivering.

I always look your way,
And sometimes feel your touch.

I've heard some things that they say,
I don’t know what to make of it.

I am not sure what to do,
I like you, but I'm confused.

I hear that you like me too,
These things I hear, are they true?

Once again, my hearts in knots,
Confused about what to do.

If you just give me a chance,
You just may get a surprise.

Cause whatcha see isn’t always,
Whatcha get in the end.

I'm always full of suprises,
And ya never know whats next.



(if ya ever wanna chat, you can IM me on AOL: sexikitticat -or- Poetic Bliss 82)


*A poets mind never rests, It is always dreaming*

© Copyright 2000 Tamma M. Wilson - All Rights Reserved
Kittie
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1 posted 2000-08-02 07:54 PM


Good luck with the situation, great poem!
Kittie



sweetstuff101
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2 posted 2000-08-02 11:22 PM


great poem, i really liked it.

:I've heard some things that they say,
I don’t know what to make of it.

I am not sure what to do,
I like you, but I'm confused.

I hear that you like me too,
These things I hear, are they true?

Once again, my hearts in knots,
Confused about what to do.  : ~~~>i know exactly how that feels. Hope it all works out well.

Luv,
   ~*~sweetstuff~*~



~¤*¤~iF yOu LuV sOmEoNe, PuT ThEiR nAmE iN a CiRcLe, iNsTeAd Of A hEaRt, BcUz HeArTz CaN bReAk, BuT CiRcLeZ gO oN 4eVeR~¤*¤~

Salooma
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3 posted 2000-08-03 12:16 PM


nice poem....good luck with your crush!

salooma

StarPryncess17
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4 posted 2000-08-03 12:34 PM


How sweet. Hope it works out for you. Keep your hopes up...

~*~Why is it that love always starts with a hug, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear?~*~

Tamma
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5 posted 2000-11-28 05:27 PM


Going thru my old posts again...this one popped out at me. Reminds me of me and Justin b4 we got together. LoL. Oh yea, *bump*

~*~ Tamma Loves Justin ~*~



“Tyme heals all wounds, but some might just take a lifetyme to heal.”
~Me

Lakewalker
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6 posted 2000-11-29 04:16 PM


I think you did a really good job on this one, it really expressed those feelings well.  Thanks for bumping this up for us

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
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7 posted 2000-11-30 07:50 PM


Another good one!!
KEEP IT UP TAMMA!



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