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mystique Junior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 22 |
Say you love me, show me you care. Hold me in your arms, promise you will always be there. Never cheat on me, always tell me the truth. Treat me with respect, let my heart be soothed. Say words from the heart, so I know their true meaning. Treat me the way you did, in the very beginning. mystique |
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Kittie Member
since 2000-07-08
Posts 103 |
Very beautiful and straight forward. The ending is very wonderful because too often things change, and then love falls apart. Kittie |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions Mystique! This is such a lovely first post ... I hope to read more! Check your e-mail for a special message. Best wishes, /Kit |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
welcome to passions...this is a really wonderful first post...keep up the good work... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
welcome to passions!!! i guess everyone says that  short but lovely looking forward to seeing more of your work in here. thanks for sharing this |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
welcome to passions! great post....simple and plainly grand! i love the style you gave it. hope to read more of yor stuff! salooma |
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mystique Junior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 22 |
Thank you very much for all your kind words and praise. I was scared at first, but now I feel welcome. Thanks again! mystique |
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