Teen Poetry #3 |
I Hate You So Much I Love You |
DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
* I Hate You So Much I Love You * I hate the way you look at me, and the way you make me feel. I hate how you're always right, and how you win every single fight. I hate your cocky attitude, and that mind of your's, oh so crued. I hate how you always know the right things to say, and how you call me everyday. I hate how you're drawing me in, and how I don't know whats going to happen. But most of all.. I hate how I'm falling for you, because that's the last thing i want to do. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
ohh wow dancinqueen...you left me speechless...keep up the good work... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
Wow....I loved this....everything about it was just beautiful. Great work! Salooma |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Thank you guys so much for your comments..means alot* ~!*DancinQueen*!~ "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
awesome poem...great writing one question though, why are you holding yourself back? |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Acire~ Because i've been hurt so many times in the past. Everytime i let myself fall i get hurt and im just relaly cautious and i dont want it to happen again.. "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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Lovely_Kris Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 176 |
I love this poem. I think you did a wounderful poem. I hope some day you can find someone who cares alot about you. Lovely_Kris |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
wow girl! now you sound like me. lol. don't do that. you may be passing up the perfect chance...then you'll spend a long while pondering what could have been. Just keep that in mind. Maybe you should express to this guy your fears of falling because the last few times you've hit the pavement and make him understand how it's going to de hard for you...but if he's a good guy and is supportive, then he'll stick by you and take away some of the pain and fears. Just keep your head up. Love Always ~*~Jessica~*~ *~* I wIsH I wAs A LiTTlE gIrL aGaIn; SkInNeD kNeEs AnD bRuIsEd ElBoWs ArE eAsIeR tO hEaL tHaN a BrOkEn HeArT!*~* |
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