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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
~This is dedicated to my sister, who is a member of Passions.~ I love you with all my heart You have touched me with all your poems Some are confusing, but have a purpose I am glad that we are a family I am glad we are sisters We even have that song "Wind Beneath My Wings" I know we fight but its normal I have taken care of you my entire life I am definitely not done yet I hope life treats you kind I hope you don't make the same mistakes that I have But stuff happens I want you to know that your my hero I wouldn't be where I am now without you Keep your head up Don't do anything stupid I LOVE YOU Luv always, Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "True love last forever" |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
That was a very good poem-so sweet. It's great to have such a good relationship with your sister. Keep writing Bel |
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Tara Member
since 2000-02-21
Posts 76Minnesota |
That's a super sweet poem. I don't have a sister and i've always wanted one, but i do have a cousin who i grew up with who i consider a sister, so i know what you are saying in this. the poem is just so true of the relationship sisters (or in my case cousins) have. i loved it. keep up the good work. Tara |
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The_Driven Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 60 |
While i dont have any siblings to share life with, im sure your sister would be very proud of the poem you wrote. Good job, and keep up the good writing. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
this is a sweet poem chel...i hope that your sister likes it very much...keep up the good work... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Thanx you guys for taking time to read my poem. Maybe you could read some of my sisters work. Her username is Kittie. I don't know how many of you read her work, but she is the reason I started writing. Please read her work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "True love last forever" |
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Jacman Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291Dwight Il, US |
Hey you are a great sister. My favorite line in the poem is.. "Don't do anything stupid." That is something I've been told many of times and it really is sound advice. Jason  Just as soon as I belong, then it's time I disapear... -Metallica- |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
What a sweet thing to do! Great poem and your sister must be very lucky to get great advice from a sister like you. Salooma |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What a lovely tribute to your sister Chel! I too, have a sister ... 5 years older, and wouldn't trade her love and compassion for the world. I'm sure Kittie feels just as fortunate!  Best wishes to both you and Kittie, /Kit |
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Lovely_Kris Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 176 |
I really like this poem. I think you did a great job. hope to read more of your work soon. Lovely_Kris |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Once again thank you for reading my work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "True love last forever" |
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Kittie Member
since 2000-07-08
Posts 103 |
Sorry that it took me so long to respond Chel, things in life are a little rough. You are, and will always be my sister that I love a lot, even through the arguments. Remember, I wouldn't be so annoying if I didnt love and admire you. Kittie ps~ thank you for always taking care of me. |
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katy New Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 4 |
chel, that was so beautiful. i too have a sister and there is nothing that could ever compare to the love that sisters share. great work! ~*~katy~*~ |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
I adore the simplicity of this poem. The message was so heart-felt and I'm glad your sister has the oppurtinity to be so blessed. Jeremy "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade." |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
I have understood that from reading your responses that I am a great sister, but sometimes I wonder how great am I? Or do you really know? I know you read my work and sometimes people email me, but I am really thinking that you guys don't really know me. If you would like that chance please email if you want if you don't i'll understand. Thank you all very much for taking time out to read my poetry, if you guys didn't respond I don't think I would have stayed. Keep up your own good work. Luv always, Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "True love last forever" |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
What a sister!!! Kittie is lucky to have you as a sis. Though we really don't know you, we could still see this thru your poem. Unless you didn't mean what you said in the poem. But everyone can see the sincerity in it. Yes, you are a great sister for all you wish for her is the best. And how many sisters write poems for the other one....hmmmmmm? As i wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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