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Vball Chickie1624
Member

since 2000-05-14

Posts 116
New York

0 posted 2000-07-31 08:37 AM

As I lay here,
I wonder why you haven't been returning my calls.
I wonder if something's gone wrong,
And I just don't know it.
You seemed just fine the other day,
But now you're acting weird.
Maybe I'm just imagining things,
Maybe I'm all wrong,
But something in my gut tells me I'm right.
It tells me that your feelings aren't he same as mine.
It tells me that I may be about to hear someting I don't want to.
Maybe I'll hear "I just want to be friends,"
Or "You know I love you but I don't want a girlfriend."
If you're going to say that,
I don't want to hear it.
Spare me the pain,
And the the agony of another love lost.
Spare me the tears,
And the hurt.
Please...just spare me the heart break.

7-30-00

It takes a minute to get a crush on someone, an hour to like them, a day to love them, and a lifetime to forget them.
Dedicated to: MD

Chel
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA

1 posted 2000-07-31 09:09 AM

Hey there, Great poem. Keep up the good work. I like the way that you put this poem together. I know the feeling, happens to me like all the time. Just keep your head up.

Chel

"True friends stab you in the front"
"True love last forever"

LyricFetish
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 528
North Carolina

2 posted 2000-07-31 10:26 AM

I agree with you, I wish guys would spare me all that bull, too. I really liked your poem, it sounds like something I would write. Nice work!

*~Meredith~*< !signature-->

This comment was edited to delete one inappropriate word.

If I could read your mind,
What would you say?
Would it take my breath away?
*Human

[This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 08-01-2000).]

sherm
Member

since 2000-07-21

Posts 94
Evansville,IN

3 posted 2000-07-31 12:14 PM

thats a really good poem, but sad i hope everything works out for you keep on writing

FairyPrincess
Junior Member

since 2000-07-26

Posts 25

4 posted 2000-07-31 12:23 PM

That was a really great poem. Keep your head up and I hope things work out for you. I can't wait to read more.

Jess

DancinQueen

Senior Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

5 posted 2000-07-31 02:56 PM

great poem. too bad guys dont always follow those simple instructions huh?

~!*DancinQueen*!~

"One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be"
~Carol King

Lovely_Kris
Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 176

6 posted 2000-07-31 03:17 PM

Wounderful poem. I think you did a great job. I hope to read more and keep up the great work.
lovely_kris

Vball Chickie1624
Member

since 2000-05-14

Posts 116
New York

7 posted 2000-08-01 08:09 AM

Thanks for the replies guys. Yea, DancinQueen I wish they follwed those simple instructions = ) Thanks guys!

Love ya all
Danielle

It takes a minute to get a crush on someone, an hour to like them, a day to love them, and a lifetime to forget them.
Dedicated to: MD

Salooma
Senior Member

since 2000-01-28

Posts 781

8 posted 2000-08-01 11:08 AM

wow great heartfelt poem....beautiful!

salooma

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