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Zombie Man Member
since 1999-06-22
Posts 52Va |
Why do most people think beauty is how we look. Can't we wear all black clothes, have red hair, and put purple nail polish on and still be beautiful? Aren't we all pretty, but in our own unique ways. Others may say you are a freak. Others may say you are cute. It doesn't matter what each person says about your style. Only what you believe in and feel that you are doing what feels so true to your heart. People may want you to change to fit their image of beauty. But never do such a thing, as long as you are true to yourself. Only then they all might see true beauty in a different way. |
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Lovely_Kris Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 176 |
I think you did a nice job and hope to read more. keep up the great work. Lovely_Kris [This message has been edited by Lovely_Kris (edited 07-30-2000).] |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
that was great! i really know what you mean in that poem, i really liked it. Luv, ~*~sweetstuff~*~ ~People R supposed 2 B luved, and things R supposed 2 B used; most of our problems stem from realiTy: Things R luved and People R used~ |
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cutie2005 Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 148Bennett, Colorado USA |
This was a great poem.. Although I don't really know how you feel about it.. I'm kind of a person that fits in with everyone and wears what everyone else wears, and does whatever anyone else will do. There are times when I will do or wear or say whatever I want to, but i just fit in.. Anyway It was a great poem hope to hear more!!! Love ya, cutie If you love someone you would go to the end of the world for them! |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
good poem...it is nothing but the truth...we are judged by the way we look nowdays... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Hey haven't heard from you in a while. I really enjoyed this poem. I can relate to it as well. I think you did a great job putting it together. Keep up the good work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "True love last forever" |
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