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Enchanted Star
Junior Member

since 2000-07-30

Posts 14
New Port Richey, FL

0 posted 2000-07-30 12:57 PM

I'm leaving you now
My friends too
But don't be sad,
I'll be back soon
I'll miss your face
And your I love you's
I will remember your face,
so I don't cry
This is not a goodbye
Its a long goodnight, see you
in the morning light
Miss me while I'm gone
I know you will
I will too,

I miss my butterflies
when I kiss your lips
I can already feel my face frowning
I will miss my smile when you laugh
I will miss you more then life
itself
You are mmy life...
You are my world...
You are my everything...
I Love You and...
Goodbye....

CindyLuC

Jose Marti
Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 374
washing DC

1 posted 2000-07-30 01:51 AM

Wow your poetry is very good, I'm becoming a fan of your's.
you really should publish your work
I wish that i could write as well as you, I'm not kidding.

sherm
Member

since 2000-07-21

Posts 94
Evansville,IN

2 posted 2000-07-30 02:58 AM

wow great poem leaving someone behind for even the shortest time can really be hard keep up the good writing

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2000-07-30 07:29 AM

Welcome to Passions Enchanted Star!

This is a lovely first post! I hope the reunion was just as sweet as the goodbye

Check your e-mail for a special message.

Best wishes,
/Kit

FairyPrincess
Junior Member

since 2000-07-26

Posts 25

4 posted 2000-07-30 08:03 AM

that was a really great poem, very sweet too. keep up the good work.

Jess

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

5 posted 2000-07-30 01:01 PM

ohh wow...this was a really good poem...i give you 2 thumbs up...keep up the good work...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

TearsOfPearls
Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 322
Vereeniging, South-Africa

6 posted 2000-07-30 03:22 PM

Great poem Star. You have a wonderful talent and you out it to great use.

Keep up the good writing.

Waves...amazing hey? Wind blowing over smoothe ocean water creates shear. The longer the wind blows, and the futher the fetch, the more energy gets transferred from the wind to the water. What started off as a breeze 1 000km away, ends up as a glass-faced barrel at some far off beach.

mr0001
Junior Member

since 2000-06-09

Posts 39

7 posted 2000-07-30 03:31 PM

this poem is exactly what i wish i could say to the guy who i am madly in love with and am having to leave soon. i hope everything works out w/you guys. good poem

mr

"crazy" is just who you are...amplified.

some people draw the outlines in life, i chose to add the color.

Chel
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA

8 posted 2000-07-31 09:46 AM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!! Great first post. I enjoyed it very much. I have the same exact feelings, but it seems you know to express them better than I do. Keep up the good work.

Chel

"True friends stab you in the front"
"True love last forever"

StarPryncess17
Senior Member

since 2000-05-31

Posts 932
Colorado

9 posted 2000-07-31 11:46 AM

wonderful poem! Sometimes good-byes have to be said, but when done right, the re-union will be just as sweet. I hope yours was. This was a beautiful first post! Keep it up!
Love Always
~*~Jessica~*~

p.s. Welcome to Passions!!

*~* I wIsH I wAs A
LiTTlE gIrL aGaIn;
SkInNeD kNeEs AnD
bRuIsEd ElBoWs ArE
eAsIeR tO hEaL tHaN a
BrOkEn HeArT!*~*

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