»
Archives
»
Teen Poetry #3
»
a shooting star
| Teen Poetry #3 |
|
a shooting star |
|
|
Lovely_Kris Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 176 |
The stars are bright The stars are small High in the sky As I look up The sky is dark The air is cool The wind blows The flowers bloom The smell of grass The moon is bright The moon is peacful As I stare at the sky I can see a shooting star go by Lovely_Kris [This message has been edited by Lovely_Kris (edited 07-30-2000).] |
||
| © Copyright 2000 Lovely_Kris - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
sounds like you like stars...i like them too but only when i am able to see them...and i only seen a shooting star once... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
||
|
Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Hello there, great poem. Keep up the good work. There were some nice images in this poem. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "True love last forever" |
||
|
LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
I enjoyed this very much! It's like being in a dream. Kind of 'star-dusty'. Great job! If I could read your mind, What would you say? Would it take my breath away? *Human |
||
|
Kittie Member
since 2000-07-08
Posts 103 |
Very beautiful and peaceful. Your poetry is growing always, and will continue to do so, don't ever give up; keep reaching for the stars. Kittie |
||
|
TearsOfPearls Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 322Vereeniging, South-Africa |
This is a lovely poem Kris, I like it alot. Keep up the good writing.  Waves...amazing hey? Wind blowing over smoothe ocean water creates shear. The longer the wind blows, and the futher the fetch, the more energy gets transferred from the wind to the water. What started off as a breeze 1 000km away, ends up as a glass-faced barrel at some far off beach. |
||
|
Lovely_Kris Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 176 |
Thank you all for reading my poems. I hope you keep enjoying my poems and keep reading them. Thanks again. Lovely_Kris |
||
DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Thats a beautiful poem. I like stars, too =) Keep up the great work* ~!*DancinQueen*!~ "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
||
|
Lovely_Kris Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 176 |
Thanks daninqueeen for reading my poem. I would also like to say thanks to everyone else who replyed to me poem. Thanks again. Lovely_Kris |
||
|
Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
A simple and very beautiful vision you've shown us here. Exellent work! *Krista Knutson* "You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back." -Barbara DeAngelis |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
