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Jenn Cirrincione
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0 posted 2000-07-26 05:04 PM


The water pours down upon me...
Hate erased,
The world is calm...
Tranquil days are present.

Soothe my soul,
Roughness is overcome.
Please bear with me...
Lightning has struck more than once.

The pain that was felt is slowly fading...
A smile growing,
My heart is ventalating.
Call to me... my hope knows no bounds.
BREATHE.....


[This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 07-26-2000).]

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Erin
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1 posted 2000-07-26 05:10 PM


it sounds like you were going through a rough time in your life...and now it is over...if i am wrong i am sorry...keep up the good work...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

Kit McCallum
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2 posted 2000-07-27 06:33 AM


Oh Jenn ... I just loved this poem!  Beautiful ... Keep it up!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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3 posted 2007-12-16 10:23 AM


Enjoyed



ARCTIC WIND

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