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Alex Sankowich Junior Member
since 2000-07-17
Posts 28North Carolina, USA |
I'm depressed right now...but here's what's on my mind I guess...that's what poetry is about. "dead" i feel dead i don't know what to do i don't know what to say i want it all to go away take this away from me i wish someone could see what the hell is wrong with me it makes me want to flee i want to know what's wrong and no it's not my shlong i feel dead my life has no worth if i didn't have bristol i would be lying in my deathbed my life has no meaning only to bristol it does i am only alive for one reason and that's "just cuz..." i'd give my life for bristol's but there is no need because there is no warning to heed i've done my good deeds but who knows from this point where my life leads i feel dead sometimes i just see red i feel the pain and i feel like i am gonna go insane but i've only got myself to blame so is this the end? or am i just dead? i'd better stop while i'm ahead or like i said i will be dead i feel dead < !signature--> -- "True love lasts forever." "Heroes will get remembered, but legends will never die." [This message has been edited by Alex Sankowich (edited 07-26-2000).] |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Alex, I have never read anything like this from you, but I did enjoy reading it. Keep your head up. Keep up the good work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Always do your best, you will always succeed" |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
you say that your life has no worth in your poem...it sure does...if it didnt you wouldnt be such a good poet...ans people wouldnt love you...but you are a good poet and people do love you...so stop thinking that way... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
I agree with Erin. Life comes with a mix of emotions. When it gets difficult to handle..rest it and then go on Sincerely A_L |
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Alex Sankowich Junior Member
since 2000-07-17
Posts 28North Carolina, USA |
I never said that no one loved me...that poem was just...ehh...it's hard to explain. I believe in the saying my mom says: "This too shall pass." I love it. I know we all have struggles and stuff, and I know I'll get passed it. But depression, in my own little theory, is a form of schizophrenia. But sometimes, I just feel bad, sometimes I don't. I'm out. < !signature--> -- "True love lasts forever." "Heroes will get remembered, but legends will never die." [This message has been edited by Alex Sankowich (edited 07-26-2000).] |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed  ARCTIC WIND |
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