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Love lives forever
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Love lives forever |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Mysteries left untold waiting to unfold Nursing the searing pain and cold Past and future are two distant realms We can't hold them in our palms I miss your sweet voice and tender teach I miss your compassion and love Baby, where are your sweet sounding words Why did they turn into life taking swords Where did we go wrong in our quest Where is the understanding and trust We lost something and it can be recovered But now my vision has become so blurred Pain mars my vision and I too need some compassion I gave all of me whether you believe it or not I've almost been to the edge of insanity I made a slow recovery to what I am Just show in your words we can be together Till you live in my dreams everyday and me in yours The day we meet it'll be our union A_L |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
So many emotions in this Amazon_lover! You've expressed yourself well with these heartfelt sentiments ... well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
this is a really good one a_l...keep up the good work...i am really enjoying reading your poems... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Of love, about dreams and with a view on eternality of love and being in love... this poem says much more.... Amazon_Lover, This is wonderful... regards, sudhir |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Great poem.....you express all of your emotions so easily. Keep up the writing it was great Bel |
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