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LoveLess1
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since 2000-07-25
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0 posted 2000-07-25 03:20 PM


From the moment out eyes met I knew you were the one I wanted to be with forever. You make me feel so good inside it makes me realize how much I truely care for you. When your blue eyes meet mine I know you are the one for me. I will love you forever no matter what happenes to us in the future. My love is endless.

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TrueLUV
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since 2000-07-19
Posts 158
Connecticut, U.S.A.
1 posted 2000-07-25 05:02 PM


Great poem hopefully you'll get a chance to tell this guy what you feel inside in person and I hope it all works out in the end   remember keep on smiling
thebeautybrat
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since 2000-03-30
Posts 114
Florida
2 posted 2000-07-25 08:39 PM


lovely poem!! i liked it a lot and i can totally realte to this!!

It is better to have loved and lost, than to never have loved at all.

Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
3 posted 2000-07-26 03:21 AM


welcome to passions!!! this is a good poem...i hope that this guy knows how you feel about him...you never know how he may feel until you let him know how you feel...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
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Ontario, Canada
4 posted 2000-07-26 06:21 AM


Welcome to Passions Loveless!

It's wonderful to find someone who makes
you feel so good ... keep up the writing!

Best wishes,
/Kit

[This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 07-26-2000).]

amazon_lover
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since 2000-04-09
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland
5 posted 2000-07-26 03:05 PM


simple and pleasant
smoothie
New Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 4

6 posted 2000-07-26 04:53 PM


Nicole, That was a really touching poem, i thought it was really sweet!  I hope that everything works out for you and that person.  I think that everything will work out great for you guys!!  
Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
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Realm of Supernatural
7 posted 2007-12-03 09:41 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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