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No One But the Rain
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No One But the Rain |
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The_Driven Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 60 |
"I'am alone. I'am depressed. I'am in alot of pain." No one to share in my misery. No one i can talk to about my pain. No one to keep me company. No one but the rain. Suddenly, im sinking... A Languid feeling overtakes me. When my eyes finally open next, I find that i'am free. Free from the same depressing shadows, and the misery that binds me to these things. Floating, gliding through paradise, on crystal-colored wings. Ah! here is the life! Free of pain, free of misery. Free of this plague called stryfe. However, the more im here, the more i see... This fantastic life is not meant to be. As much as i try to deny it, as much as it feels good to be free. The reality of it is: A cold, and unforgiving life, is the only thing awaiting me. I try not to wake up, i hold onto my dreams tight. For if i were to let go, then i would surely lose the fight. I cling to my dream, desperately scraped together to help a dying spirit. But as much as i try to fight, i can sense the end of my dream nearing. What was once warm like the sun's glow, is now unforgiving; depressingly cold. The cruel hand of reality, has struck me three-fold. Bringing me back to my life of misery. Back to my life of pain. With no one to keep me company. No one but the rain. "DAMMIT, WHY COULDN'T YOU JUST LET ME DREAM!!!!" |
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Vball Chickie1624 Member
since 2000-05-14
Posts 116New York |
That was a very interesting poem. I liked it a lot....very good. I hope to read more. Keep writing and have fun!! Love ya Danielle  "Dream what you want to dream; go where you want to go; be what you want to be, because you have only one life and one chance to do all the things you |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Hey there, nice poem, very intersting. Leaves me with a lot of questions. Keep up the good work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Always do your best, you will always succeed" |
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Lani_DarkOne Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 152UK |
I know exactly how you feel..waking from dreams hurts alot, i'd rather not dream.. this is excellent, your feelings are portrayed vividly and to the point.. "Controlling my feelings for too long.... And forcing our darkest souls to unfold... And pushing us into self-destruction...." *~Muse*~ |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
Wow, your poem is full of passion and yearning. Very true, and very scary. Great job! *~Meredith~* It's so obvious That the promise Keeps me here Painting pictures where All the colors Disappear *Lit |
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Le Capitan de L'Amour Member
since 2000-07-15
Posts 60 |
Hey Berry thats a very nice poem, and i want u to know that I share that pain with you.see ya later buddy.from chris |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
this poem is quite intresting...alot of people feel the same way you do...they just dont express what they are feeling... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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The_Driven Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 60 |
Although i dont actually feel this way in real life(well sometimes), i would still like to thank you all for your responses. They were a pleasure to read. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed  ARCTIC WIND |
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