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Teen Poetry #3

Waiting for eternity

Le Capitan de L'Amour
Member

since 2000-07-15

Posts 60

0 posted 2000-07-22 07:38 PM

Yesterday was the night, the night I dream about you, the night I had you beside me, the night I went to war, the night I got captured and executed.

But even in the darkness of death, I remembered you,
even hen the gods of that heavenly sky tryed to erase my memory of you I didnt let it go.

And after i waited an eternity, you finnaly came, but it was too late because I was about to be reeborn again.

But before I left I got a kiss from those virgin lips, which I remembered since that night when I left you.

Then I finnaly woked up in the middle of the night and I realize it was just a dream, and ever since I thanked god every day for having you and for been with you, been with the most beautifull woman in the
world as beautifull as Cleopatra, and with these words I said "Good night my darling good night".

StarPryncess17
Senior Member

since 2000-05-31

Posts 932
Colorado

1 posted 2000-07-22 07:41 PM

Such sentiments involved! Your thoughts are anything but incomplete and leaves for interesting reading! Well, a dream is a dream, but I do know how you feel. Keep writing, you're good at it!
Love Always
~*~Jessica~*~

*~* I wIsH I wAs A
LiTTlE gIrL aGaIn;
SkInNeD kNeEs AnD
bRuIsEd ElBoWs ArE
eAsIeR tO hEaL tHaN a
BrOkEn HeArT!*~*

buttercup411
Junior Member

since 2000-07-03

Posts 41
miami, fl, u.s

2 posted 2000-07-22 07:45 PM

hey .......girls love a guy who could express like that...good job ... : )
au revoir,
love
une jeune fille... : )

Jose Marti
Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 374
washing DC

3 posted 2000-07-22 10:08 PM

Great poem christian. It has very good ending, I envy your writing skills tremendously. Bon chance ici.

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

4 posted 2007-12-02 08:31 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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